thanks for all the positive feed back I thought I was through... I atually thought these niggas was crazy but I reviewed his verse and he was ill but I still don't think I should lose.... but I guess it's first to four...

yo vote on this it is a very good battle ppl there will be no dissapointment

upping...

yeah.....
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Voted For: Tarik Donovan

Tarik won this one for me.... Definately had better punches and wordplay... The personals were better in Lawless's but i definately liked tarik donovan's personals better...
Best Line:
he couldn't be wacker if he changed his name to sinner...
no way he'd be a winner in a battle cuz he gets ate for dinner...

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upping we need some votes on this...

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Voted For: Tarik Donovan

Vote for Lawless
Lawless:
Your metaphors were crazy and you had a nice flow. your similies were good. ur punches hit hard. eg..
"it's ironic how he pussy and can't find it where it be no price
knowin' damn well he couldn't get blown if he was casino dice"
The bad thing is you had no personals.
Tarik Donovan:
your flow wuz hot but some of your lines were just filler. your first line wuz hot, but it seems you were more concentrated on making the second line ryhme, that you didn't add in another punch. you had plenty of hot lines, but too many lines that were useless. eg.. and I ain't bein' demonic i smoke herbs like you like chronic. your flow is good, but you need to work on your content more. I liked the line, "you suck dicks while I shoot off more bricks than the supersonics."

Both of you were good, but lawless won. Holla at ur boi

-freddy p-

vote for lawless (Hs)
 

Vote for Lawless (Hs)
Lawless:
Your metaphors were crazy and you had a nice flow. your similies were good. ur punches hit hard. eg..
"it's ironic how he pussy and can't find it where it be no price
knowin' damn well he couldn't get blown if he was casino dice"
The bad thing is you had no personals.
Tarik Donovan:
your flow wuz hot but some of your lines were just filler. your first line wuz hot, but it seems you were more concentrated on making the second line ryhme, that you didn't add in another punch. you had plenty of hot lines, but too many lines that were useless. eg.. and I ain't bein' demonic i smoke herbs like you like chronic. your flow is good, but you need to work on your content more. I liked the line, "you suck dicks while I shoot off more bricks than the supersonics."

Both of you were good, but lawless won. Holla at ur boi

-freddy p-[/QUOTE]

tha computer's fuckin wit me cuz i voted 4 lawless

nks for the vote it doesn't go unnoticed aye if you voted for me or tarik none of that shit counted cuz you didnt do it battlewise in otha words you freeposted your votes so we would appreacite it if you would come back and do your votes in categories...
thanks ppl....

until voters return to this topic to restate their votes it's
(LAW)0-0(tarik)

upping... I should have changed the post count to 100 cuz these damn herbs don't know how to vote.

tarik, holla at tha kid. i set up tha battle, post ur verse

-freddy p-

Voted For: Lawless (Hs)

Lawless:

Flow-8/10
Punches-8/10
Wordplay-7/10 (too basic man)
Personals-6/10

Tarik:

Flow-6/10
Punches-6/10
Wordplay-4/10
Personals-0/10

Lawless-29/40

Tarik-16/40

Both verses were pretty basic...Lawless, I've seen much more creative punches from you in the past, so I was a little disappointed when reading your verse, but your shit still struck harder than his.

Tarik, your verse was weak man...Way too much self-glorification. When you are in a battle, don't waste time talking about how good you are...You gotta go straight for his throat. Your punches were basic, and you had some shitty-ass wordplay...Elevate though man...You'll get it...1

2-0 me....

THAT DAMN SYSTEM THING IS FUCKIN' UP.... that guy voted for me...

Voted For: Lawless (Hs)

Aight......
not a bad battle

Lawless ya came alot harder, wasnt as basic within your flow as your oppenet, only flaw is the way u structured ya flow, dont seperate bars like that man....

ya had better punches, an metaphors, ya played off famous people in ya rhymes too, thats cool, i do that alot too, good verse...
ya get my vote

Tarik, ya verse was aight
it flowed an the structure was alot better than Lawless, but ya didnt come as hard with the mats n punches, they was less witty so i cant vote for u on the fact ya structure was better
just be more creative with ya wordplay

No hate an RTF In any of my battles ya see on front lines or whatever

Thanks

Peace n g'luck y'all