Voted For: Cannabarz

Cannabarz: decent drop form you..punches were aight..structure was blah..flow was on point..(dont captialize the words)..but overall u had a decent drop

3x: i wasnt feelin ur drop..punches were weak..decen structure from you..vocab was aight..but overall ur punches need improving

RTF Cannabarz

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Voted For: Cannabarz

3x, you had very simple rhymes and no punches, and no wordplay. three things you need to win a battle, work on that.
for wordplay start out with comparing things with (like),,, for example- nah ..3x is not here like a DIRT BIKE on NURF TYPES
^^^not all that cool, but see how that works? put a diss and then think of what that think can literally mean and put like in the middle of the two. think of any disses or compliments and then think of somethin that it could mean literally, another example, your verse has more wackness in it than his hand with lotion. or sumin i just freestyled that one. ^^ but see how u call someone wack than or dope or drop hot. anyway read tutorials.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
cannabarz-
not that hot of a drop, but u obviously know more of what your doin then the other cat so you gotta take this battle. my favorate that i understood kinda. was your first bar, if he has a blinking avy. decent personal punch, and i like how you didn't set it up sayin you make him lose life, i dont like selfgloryifing lines.
anyway hit up my battle in my sig wit an honest vote. peace

Voted For: Cannabarz

flow cann
structure cann
opener-closer cann
personels cann
imagry cann
vocab cann
hits cann

but hey keep elevating dog you will get their peace. And oh yea look up my bats peace.

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