This was feedback posted for Lawless (Hs)
 

ey yall dis aint no vote its juss some feedback...but damn if i was aloud to vote i dont no who i would pick....i caint vote cause soulja is my boy so yea...but yall tore dis shit up

Voted For: Lawless (Hs)

lawless took this handsdown
my favorite lines

the boy a g bottom line jus avoid me/
he couldn't deliver me beef if he was a Papa John employee/

i'ma be nice and ASK if you ready bitch/
then i'll make sure you get a Timbaland like Ginuwine and Missy Elliot/

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yo we uppin' here's my 10 line verse my bad...

when you spit the whole state's booin' you/
battlin me you'll fucc around and catch a Who Kid? like G unit do/

i'ma be nice and ASK if you ready bitch/
then i'll make sure you get a Timbaland like Ginuwine and Missy Elliot/

the boy a g bottom line jus avoid me/
he couldn't deliver me beef if he was a Papa John employee/

you must be confused soulja you too lame to fucc wit me/
i'll disrespect you publicly and leave you cryin' like a parent denied joint custody/

I'm jus respondin to the battle we neva had/
from the beginnin' you was gettin stomped on like stairs when a teenager mad/

Voted For: Lawless (Hs)

Vote Lawless-
For one YoungSoulja's Shit Diden't even ryme
Much better and many more metaphores
Young i think you need to learn to spell
and formatt your stuff better and i could barley read it
Lawless I liked the 2 Bar Split it was easy and simple.....
Nice Work Both of you and i would love to see more.....

Voted For: Lawless (Hs)

aight i gotta go with dude law....just bcuzz he had some creativity and punchlines even tho some were kind of played...n young u didn't have no punchlines..creativity u had 1 personal but it was wack ya verse was very basic so u cant be madd at me 4 vote against u.......

opener-young...law i aint like ur's
structure-a tie
punchlines-law
wordplay-law
multies-law
creativity-law
personals-young
enjoyed-law....

return da favor ya'll its 2 links in my sig

we need some feedback people don't sleep on this

yo we are uppin for votes people come post a response

Voted For: Lawless (Hs)

nice battle god flow,nice personals,ya 2nd was nice prolly my favorite line in dis battle