if your talking to me look at my record and i beat the best on this site and my audios will sun you as well as my text
<<<<<he will merk you

Mike Hawk's Verse

The thing is, you fucking ugly, ya bitches is years behind
Only reason you like the Knicks...is cuz u cant get wit dimes
Best line of the battle....it had originality, humor, and it dissed him all at the same time.....did I mention the wordplay?
Ike is a softy, I'll come on RV to slay this whore
It's not a gay marriage...when i say he jus cant engage in war
Not a good punch.....sorry Mike, it just sucked
You scared of Mike Hawk, why wont you tell us
If i called u out, you would duck me so much, it'll make Donald jealous
Not a bad concept, but worded poorly
Nasty bitch...dont nobody wanna visit ya house
Ever since you were born..thats when they been callin it the Dirty South
Once again, not a bad concept, but worded really poorly
Ike, I got big guns....and you know what I mean
When I say, youll make it to the next round...........
....if you not dead after the first 16.
Nice closer....not really a gun talk line since it actually had wordplay in it. Probably the second best line of the battle...

Ike's Verse
Even if HAWKS sight are in black 'n' white, he's "gonna see im nice"
might try to imitate jordan, but nobody "wanna be like mike"
I've only seen like two or three of Mike's battles since he's been here.....both of them contained this punch...
may think you nice, but only to "yaself it might seem"
you say you tight, despite your record bein "twelve 'n' nineteen"
How is this a good punch? His record sucks......now can you make a decent punch out of it? No, you can't. All you can say is your record sucks.....this one ranks up there with a your momma joke
just comprehend you cant step, you "see my spits is crimes"
ripped up....hawk gets lit up like "trees at christmas time"
Horrible....if you have to use the word "like" in your punch, chances are, it sucks.....just thought I'd let you know that
IKE is spittin gifted lines, that rip this "misfits mind"
and leave this chumps frame crooked like a "lipstick line"
Once again, the simple fact that this is a simile took all affectiveness away from this punch...
I choose to elude this dude, this verse is a "lesson you might use"
you's a fool if you thought i'd lose to a "freshman in high school"
So he's a freshman.....nothing witty to say about it?

Basically, Ike came really played and didn't really know how to form a punch. Mike Hawk had Two semi decent punches that completely engulfed anything Ike tried to have go in his favor. This was a pretty crappy battle, but honestly, Mike won by a landslide.....and this is just me being honest :thumbup:

a. you win the rv award for the fattest fuck on the site
b. i have no game? haha thats all i can say on that
c. im sure you havent seen your penis in about 6 years because you so fuckin huge your stomach hangs over it, so im sure there has never been a female within a 5 foot radius of your dick....but yet i have no game? haha
d.apparently your fat and you cant read worth a shit because it is obvious i won the battle....

lol so i lost because i used the word "like"???????? ok

basically 2 words describe you................played & wack

ike stfu, you can't fucking cry because of one battle seriously now your being a fucking retard about this

It's a similie and they don't go well with punches

I could say your shit sucks like....

1. Feces with vacuum cleaners
2. Turds with DSLs
3. Magnetic Crap

Do you see what I'm getting at. It loses it's effectiveness if I can say just about anything with your generic similie.....:thumbup:

aright man......im done with the beef n everything.....im just tryin to back myself up because i thought i won the battle........im still gonna try my hardest to get back in this shit...cuz im only down 4-2......but i know it prolly aint gonna happen....so it whatever.....lets just drop the beef net beef is garbage......we good?

Yeah.....I wasn't trying to beef with you. In all actuality, I was trying to help you elevate. Take some of my advice, it wasn't out of anger :thumbup:

aright man i hear ya....ill try not to use the "like" word so much anymore.....lol but troop did use it in his verse! and he is a vet.....lol but on the real....thanks for tryin to help.....no beef..

Troop is not a vet....please take that back....lol.

Anyway, it's not the word "like" that kills the punch, it's the fact that it's a similie. The word could sometimes be "as"

Gay as a unicorn riding, rainbow sporting, in the ass taking, tight shirt wearing, feminine voice sounding.....well, I think you get my point....lol.

Just try not to use similies :thumbup:

lol aright ill try but damn...thats alot of my shit......i know this may sound gay or whatever....but as far as battles go.....i try to model myself after cassidy with the hard hittin punches and multis like he does.....he uses a lot of similes as well..but i guess it different when you are battling in real life tho

I took one of your similies and flipped it into a way that it would sound like a more hard hitting punch....just to give you an example.

Your Similie
just comprehend you cant step, you "see my spits is crimes"
ripped up....hawk gets lit up like "trees at christmas time"

Reworded
Just comprehend you cant step, just take this blessing.... Jesus
It sickens me.... even christmas trees get lit up less than he does

I hope that helps a little :thumbup:

ok nice......i liked it