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-   -   Lawless (Hs) vs Def by Mouf (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=166307)

Def by Mouf 12-17-04 11:48 AM

uppin this battle we need some votes on it....favors will be returned if u drop a link....peaceezy

Def by Mouf 12-19-04 01:14 PM

uppin for votes on this battle...favors will get returned..peaceezy

Def by Mouf 12-19-04 10:02 PM

upping...seriously man.....I will return the favor.....just plz.......VOTE!

Def by Mouf 12-20-04 02:53 PM

upping....Lawless will return all the favors.....so drop a link....peaceeezy

Def by Mouf 12-20-04 08:30 PM

Come come now people....am i not liked at all on this site....uppin for votes...as said in previous posts.....favors will be returned...by Lawless or myself....if u drop a link....

Def by Mouf 12-23-04 10:58 PM

C'mon now......this is truly pitiful.....this is my like 2nd battle it's been here for over two weeks and has ONE vote.....c'mon uppin for votes.....

Lawless (Hs) 12-24-04 11:09 AM

we are still uppin for votes people come lay a response

Kyleon 12-28-04 03:27 AM

This was feedback posted for Def by Mouf
 
checkin dem pollz

Def by Mouf 12-28-04 11:20 AM

Hey man!!!!!.....i can tell y'all what the polls look like...we need votes man c'mon on....uppin

Def by Mouf 12-28-04 11:54 PM

uppin for feedback word son....my first battle and i haven't even won nor lost it.....

Def by Mouf 12-30-04 11:10 AM

WTF son....?.......this is my FIRST Battle,,,,i got into right after I joined and it's been her for about a month....c'mon now.....uppin son....

MaRVJay 12-30-04 02:03 PM

Voted For: Lawless (Hs)

aight..law took dis shit hands down his whole verse was hott....mouf umm i aint really feel ya shit nothin stood out no creativity

opener-law
structure-a tie
punchlines-law
wordplay-nun
mulits-law
creativity-law
personals-mouf
finisher-law
enjoyed-law......nuff said

links r in my sig...return da favor ya'll i took da time otu da vote on ya'll shit so do da same 4 me

Def by Mouf 11-17-05 08:58 PM

upping once again...so I could might get my 6th win...

H.D. 02-03-06 02:13 PM

Voted For: Def by Mouf

lol now this as a comical battle... lawless uses that set up style that wastes a line in every bar... but his punches did have a harder impact overall than Mouf's did... however Mouf's personals were harsh... *nods* I had to fuck with them... this was a good battle one of the closest I've voted on here thus far... There was one line in Law's verse however that just didn't rhyme with anything... and that's the name of the game...

Opener: Law
Closer: Mouf
Punches: Law
Personals: Mouf
Vocab: Law
structure: Neither

Vote: Mouf... The personals did it... finished on a stronger note

.:Mike Check:. 02-05-06 08:41 PM

This was feedback posted for Lawless (Hs)
 
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