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upping for feedback. i know it wasnt my best but it was pretty good.

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this was good man or woman --- yall really sihtty at givin feed in the poetry lunge
what kind of feed is 4/10 ..i feel liek slappin that dude

anyways good shit keep elevatin is all i can say

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this was o.k....pretty simple though.....could have came deeper with the concept a bit more......5/10

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Work on ya rhyming, some of your lines didn't rhyme. Work on vocab, flow, structure, overall elevate, it wuz a decent drop. px

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