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....Gone.... 12-21-04 01:19 PM

This was feedback posted for Melancholy
 
Hmmmmmmmmmm Close To Me G-luck With The Polls Melancholy Nice Verse Nice Punches Good Flow Keep Doing It Fam Peace

Emcee 12-21-04 10:25 PM

This was feedback posted for Yupi!
 
checking polls.............................................

The Militant 12-25-04 06:20 PM

Voted For: Melancholy

dame homie u merked this kid ya rhymes were tight as fuck ure flow was a lil off but still good punches and personals hit hard like a mother fucker there could of have been a few more metas but it was still a very good verse
best line-This battle is finished...you shaky so I'ma call you a skippy man...
"This kid is straight gangsta...he comes from Yippie Land!"
u had an ight verse but nothing really specill ure flow was good punches didnt really hit hard ure structre was a lil off but still tight rhymes were kinda basic but i think u still had a good verse
best line-no he's not a idiot...he's just a amature who's also plain queer
Melancholy's incompetence's a inspiration to herbs everywhere
return the favor...


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