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Voted For: Viscosity

OK BOTH FLOWS AND STRUTURES WERE CRAZY OFF VOCAB GOES TO THE GUY WITH THE V NAME ROB HAD SIMPLER WORDS V HAD MUCH BETTER PUNCHES SINCE ROB BASICALLY HAD NONE AT ALL AND THAT MDE HIM WIN THIS BATTLE.ROB PERSONALS AND PUNCHES WIN BATTLES YOU NEED TO GETS SOME.

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Voted For: Viscosity

Yo V , you need to get your rhymes in better form.. And you Dat boi, your rhymes need to be more of the same lenght..

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like you can't have that.
The battle had some weak punches lik eyou telling him to grow pubic hair when oyur 13 hahah come on dog.

vote to my boy "V" but both of oyu no hate.. keep rising..

Voted For: Viscosity

yeah dog dat hella tight hella props,punches were hard
and constant an di like dat,um creativity was der
and well keep up the
good work

^to the man saying I need to elevate.
set up a battle.
I wrote a 30 second verse, cuz he bites, im not gonna waste my lyrical talent on a noob.
Set up a battle, and ill be sure to show u lyrical elevation nigga.

Voted For: Viscosity

lol @ how this is a one-sided battle...

Opener - Viscosity, Dats wasnt a punch
Closer - Viscosity, Dats hurt himself more
Punches - Viscosity, Dat you needa elevate here
Personals - Viscosity, Dat you had none
Metas - Tie, both used'em, some better than others...
Multies - Viscosity, Dats attemps were weak
Vocab - Viscosity, Dat didnt have an vocab
Flow - Neither, both had no flow
Creativity - Viscosity for the "On Stage Battle" theme

Overall I didnt wanna seem like a total jackass asking DatBoiRob why he battled a much more experienced rook, but I envy him for the effort. Nice try dawg, but I think you need to really elevate some of your skills. First off, try keeping all of your lines close to the same lenght to ensure that the overall flow of your verse isnt thrown off. Next, try thinking of some personals that you can use on your opponent, even before that battle has began. Punches are also key, you didnt really have much in here but when you do elevate, you must think of some material that will make the votes laugh. Try making your opponent look stupid by throwing more than they can handle at them. Finally once youve mastered those...try throwing in some extra spice by using metas and multies. Play with it, and keep elevating...battling kats that are better than you will allow you to learn from your mistakes.

Easy win for Viscosity, maybe next time pick on someone your own skill level, lol...I mean, you didnt even try and still won. Come on dawg, hahaha. Good shit tho, nevertheless, you have earned my vote.

Props to both, Payce.

Please return the favour dawg, do as I have just done for you. I need hounest votes too....http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=147152

Voted For: Viscosity

well this was easy to choose even though viscositys verse had the most fucked up structure ive even seen in my life....it was hard as hell to read and you couldnt figure out which words rhymed.....atleast the other dudes you could tell which words rhymed.....ok...i think you won because you had more multis...you punches hit a whole lot harder than robs....and your whole verse was just a lil more complex....you still had some played lines....just not as played as robs...

rob....up your multis...up your vocab...up your punches.....your punches didnt hit hard at all man....no vocab in the verse at all......and not 1 multis.......neither one of you had a personal in your verse...if one of you would have used a personal...i would have voted for you.......just keep elevating.....

this was a horrible battle but....i vote for visc because his punches hit harder and they werent as played....and his verse was just a lot better