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well i'm suprized your 3-0 up, ya verse was kinda basic but i aint gon complain so uppin...
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Voted For: ..Galieth..
v/ goliath dopeman...basically most of your verse was played.....most of the bars were anyway.....i felt like you came in a not very complex way....it was too simple....and dont use the momma jokes....they are played....you had 0 multis...no metas.....and your punches just didnt hit very hard at all..... goliath....you had a couple of ok multis which helped.....your personals were decent......the nike line is played.....i dont know why you added that very last line in....didnt help any at all....basically im voting for goliath because he came less wack than dopeman.....his punches hit a lil harder and his personals were there |
This was feedback posted for ..Galieth..
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Voted For: Dopeman
Dope gets my vote becuase I think he was stronger in this battle I think his punches where harder he used more personals and he also had a excellent closure. |
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Voted For: ..Galieth..
v/ Goliath goliath took this easily in my book... first off dopeman yo flow was not on point, it was really hard to follow and switched up too much through out the battle, plus you had some stretched lines which didnt help... Goliath you had a steady flow the whole way through... the punches Goliath took because he had em all throughout the battle, Dope you jus didnt have enough... you started out with good punches, then fell off which also didnt help... not a bad battle, but i bet both of you could do better... |
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