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This was feedback posted for Black Queen
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Voted For: Black Queen
its a wrap........... punches:blackqueen personals:blackqueen multis:blackqueen structure:devistation originality:blackqueen shit ima b real wit u.............. everything but structure:blackqueen |
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Voted For: Black Queen
wow!!! once again, black queen has done it...she always seems to amaze me... devistation-near tha beginning, yo flow was coo. u had some nice lines, and creative rhyming, but then after tha first 2 bars or so, u fell off, and ur verse started to get borin. u gotta learn how to come more consistent in rhymes, and stay hot thru-out ur whole flow. ur structure was coo, but it was odd in a way. on one bar in yo verse, u forgot to complete it, so that took major points away, cause it didnt sound right. punches werent there and personals were wack. reading ur verse, was like readin a nursery rhyme...(no hate, just HONESTY) black queen-u came wit it again. and even in this verse, you switched ur style and murdered him from every angle...i was tryna focus on just tha multies you brought, but u had hard punches that knock him out, and some hard mettas. personals? i dont know about em personally to devistated,but u tied ur verse together, which gave u nice structure. no stretched or unfinished lines, and thats why i gave u tha win....OH, AND U JUST MURDERED HIM overall-this was a one-sided battle. devistated, you fell off after ur first 2 bars, and black queen came hard thru-out her entire verse, thats why she got tha win... PLZ RETURN THA VOTE ON MY BATTLE IN SIG...PLZ this is tha second battle i voted on for black queen, and i havent seen her in any of my battles...you dont wunna lose one of RV's few honest voters....plz vote..both of yall ..........................1..................... |
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