RapVerse.com Community - Jim Crow vs Jax

Voted For: Jax

fuk ya click..8 lines i spit at u jus cus u a bitch..
i would tell u that u suck at rap..but ur a snitch..

weak opener and i knew you were gonna rhyme bitch with snitch before i even read the 2nd line, thats how played that rhyme is.

u tryin to act hard?..youll get broke like Shaq do rims..
i stay runnin over u..its like im playin on Jim(gym)..

first line was weak but not as wack as the 2nd line, since the Gym is the entire building, you mean a court or floor...

ill blow away ya dome..n ya hoes wont leave me alone..
cus Jim's girl was a * at 69 before it was on my phone..

the first was just a lead up but the 2nd line was the best line out of the whole verse

u fuckin with Jax..now u know u'll fall..
cus last time u posted somethin ill..u posted me on ya wall..

again first line is just a lead up, but the last line was decent

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My *Hands* Brought You In This World When I Blast-With-Hits , After All Who *Jax*-A-Dick!!!
There’s Hardly-A-Issue, I Partly-Slit-You And *Wiped* My Ass With Your *Body-Tissue*!!!

this is a better opener, but it's not that great but i see what you were tryin' to do with the wordplay

Bruise-Quickly, You About To Hear *Bullets Sing* And I Talking About *Shooting-Whitney*!!
Your Front Is-Hard, These Lyrics *Tighter-Wrapped* Than Fat Bitches In Leotards!!!

i don't get the first line i get the sin-whitney part, but what the hell does that have to do with anything? the 2nd line is ok, but that Rap-Wrap wordplay deal is played so hard

Rip-Bars And You *Half Stupid* For Battling Me Like Decapitated Retards!!!
Murking-The-Topic I Compare Flows To Dicks So Jax *Verse-The-Softest*!!

didn't like the first line, since someone's head isn't half their body but the 2nd line is ok

Words-Hurting-With-Hotness, Only Time You *Near Ill* When He Across From The *Nurses-Office*!!!!
Load-The-Scope For Focused-Aim, Only Time Your *Text Is Hot* Is Its When Held Over *Open-Flame*!!

first line is ight, but the Ill/Doctors office deal is played too, but it's still ok, the 2nd line is ok too, but also a bit played

Over all
Punches-Jim had more, most were played but he still dropped more

Structure-Jax had even bars which made it much easier to read

metaphors-jim

wordplay-jim had the most wordplay even though most of it was played

but overall-vote Jim Crow