Uppyn this shyt. Fuck.............................................. .

Voted For: Legend

Legend had a ok structure,Nice personals,Landing Punches,Vocab was decent,and flow was tight

Dipset had bad structure,Alright Personals,Not Bad Punches,Vocab was aight,and flow was a lil off...keep elavating

v/Legend

fo sho. Uppyn.............................................

This was feedback posted for Legend
 

just checking the poll cause i dont like either of you:thumbup

And May I ask Exactly Why You Dont Like me? I Mean Ive actually Neva Met You B4 but id jus like to know

Voted For: Legend

well,lets see,structure goes to king,punches go to legend,creativity both,vocab to legend
dis battle was hott
vote-legend

Waht you talking aabout structure goes to hym. I had pretty colors. LOL.. Uppyn.

Uppyn this shit nigkas.......Favor will be returned I swear.....:D

Uppyn.............................................

Voted For: Legend

nothin much here had a better pucnhes more personals expanded his vocab more and his flow was better.

Voted For: Legend

King Dipset

This Tryna Act Tuff When he know himslef he aint nothin
Its jus His ""Michael Jackson wants to be startin Somethin""
(WEAK OPENER...FLOW IS OFF...5/10)

Slaughter who?Slaughter Me? Not By no Bitch from New Breed
bcuz yall *M*asterbate*C*onstantly dont make yall hard Mc'z
(DECENT BAR...YOUR BEST...NICE WORDPLAY...7/10)

You Happy to B 20 So U Can enter into Marriage
u'll See Ya Ugly Ass future When ya look in ya Babies carriage
(WEAK...AND PLAYED...5/10)

I Saw Ya Gurl She ugly Ass hell Im soryy You kissed her
Ill Split ya dome N make it go both ways like yo bisexual sistah
(PLAYED OUT, BUT A DECENT DISS...6/10)

This is The Last bar Im Sorry It Had To End This Way
Ill Post ya pic N my sig so U can B"Da Kingz Legend of Da day""
(WEAK CLOSER...COULDA DONE WAY MORE THAN THAT...5/10)

AIGHT KING...NO HATE BUT THIS ISNT GOOD BATTLE MATERIAL...YOU HAD RHYMES IN THERE, BUT THEY JUST WERENT GOOD ENOUGH TO TAKE LEDGEND IN THIS ONE...YOU HAD GOOD STRUCTURE, BUT OVER ALL THE FLOW WAS CHOPPY...JUST GET MORE CREATIVE AND YOU WILL BE AIGHT...NO DOUBT...AND FOR THE RECORD....HIS SISTER IS DEFFINATLEY FUCKABLE...HAVE HER HOLLA AT ME...LMAO...




LEDGEND

Kid, claim ya gifted? Like Stevie wonder FUCK what ya THOUGHT ya heard
Even me drop'n in this battle, is give'n you attention ya flow don't deserve.
(AIGHT OPENER...GOOD DISS...7/10)

When it advances ta records your a newbie on the lowest rank
Gotta better chance try'n for the Dub if ya leave ya paper blank!
(LOL...KINDA PLAYED...BUT DECENT DISS...7/10)

My punches hit ya orbit and leaves ya fake ass see’n starz
You hold no arms…… yet you still wanna stick and spar.
(DECENT FLOW...PUNCH AIGHT...8/10)

Knew you were handicapped……. but a retard?
Sorry but posting up in subliminal text will never get passed
(NOT EVERYONE WILL GET THAT...TO PLAIN...5/10)

We can clearly see that you are more ass then 100 pages of playboy mag
No one is as stupid fake as you so I should just say I’m done with this FAG.
(KINDA WEAK CLOSER, BUT A DECENT PUNCH AND DISS...7/10)

AIGHT LEDGEND...YOUR FLOW WAS DECENT, STRUCTURE WAS AIGHT AS WELL...YOU HAD DECENT WORDPLAY, AND THE VOCAB CAN BE UPPED A LIL BIT...OTHER THAN THAT DO YA THING...JUST TRY TO GET STR8 TO THE POINT ON SOMETHINGS, AND DONT LEAVE LINES UNDEFINED...AIGHT...


OH AND I WANNA C THAT PIC OF YOUR SISTER...THE ONE THEY MADE U DELETE...HOOK ME UP MAYNE...


VOTE LEDGEND...IT WAS JUST BETTER

Voted For: Legend

Kid, claim ya gifted? Like Stevie wonder FUCK what ya THOUGHT ya heard
Even me drop'n in this battle, is give'n you attention ya flow don't deserve.
When it advances ta records your a newbie on the lowest rank
Gotta better chance try'n for the Dub if ya leave ya paper blank!
My punches hit ya orbit and leaves ya fake ass see’n starz
You hold no arms…… yet you still wanna stick and spar.
Knew you were handicapped……. but a retard?
Sorry but posting up in subliminal text will never get passed
We can clearly see that you are more ass then 100 pages of playboy mag
No one is as stupid fake as you so I should just say I’m done with this FAG.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE PUNCHES BUT DONT USE THAT FONT PLZ.....ANYWAY GOOD FLOW NICE STRUTURE.....PUNCHES WERE GOOD........PERSONALS WAS GOOD TOO.......OVERALL GOOD VERSE


This Tryna Act Tuff When he know himslef he aint nothin
Its jus His ""Michael Jackson wants to be startin Somethin""

Slaughter who?Slaughter Me? Not By no Bitch from New Breed
bcuz yall *M*asterbate*C*onstantly dont make yall hard Mc'z

You Happy to B 20 So U Can enter into Marriage
u'll See Ya Ugly Ass future When ya look in ya Babies carriage

I Saw Ya Gurl She ugly Ass hell Im soryy You kissed her
Ill Split ya dome N make it go both ways like yo bisexual sistah

This is The Last bar Im Sorry It Had To End This Way
Ill Post ya pic N my sig so U can B"Da Kingz Legend of Da day""
^^^^^^^^NICE PUNCHES GOOD FLOW, NICE STRUTURE...PERSONALS WAS GOOD



OVERALL=CLOSE BATTLE BUT I VOTE FOR LEGEDN FOR HARDER PUNCHES BOTH GOT FLOW AND PERSONALS THE ONLY THING THAT I VOTED ON WAS PUNCHES SO I GIVE LEGEND FOR HARDER PUNCHES KING ELEVATE UR GETTING GOOD ADD MORE PUNCHES *HARDER ONES*


PEACE