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....Gone.... 12-22-04 09:59 PM

This was feedback posted for Coopa Bang
 
just checking the god damn polls


coopa got dis harder punches \


WORK ON STRUTURE DAMN IT


peace

Coopa Bang 12-22-04 10:38 PM

still uppin..........

Scareface 12-22-04 11:44 PM

Voted For: Coopa Bang

Aii This Is How I Feel It

Punchez
Personals
Multi's
Meta's>>>All Go to CB

Vocab
Structure>>>All go to Ike

Aii Thats Jus How i feel Others may feel different

RTF**

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Ike 12-23-04 01:03 AM

lol @ all the unexplained votes....soon to be removed.......uppin.........

Coopa Bang 12-23-04 01:47 AM

still uppin.............

Kilo704 12-23-04 11:49 AM

Voted For: Coopa Bang

aight dis was a close battle.....not great but close so here's how i scored it.

punchlines: both of u had a few, tha best 1 was on da last line of Ike's verse, but coopa bang came wit more and his made better sense.

flow: ok Ike had better structure, even tho that last line was a stretch. some of coopa's lines was squeezed 2 less than 3 words while others took up a whole line which really didn't flow well.

vocab: both of u ATTEMPTED 2 use good vocab, but still u should elevate it. illegible and impecable were good 1's 2 and they rhymed. i dont see where lifespan rhymed with tha 9th line tho on coop's behalf.

personals: this is where i think coop won it because he generally came at Ike harder. what else is there 2 say?

winner= coopa bang

Coopa Bang 12-23-04 12:07 PM

still uppin........thnx^^

Untraceable 12-23-04 04:01 PM

This was feedback posted for Coopa Bang
 
nice drop fam.............good punches........ive seen better from IKE so yeh he underestimated you..........you'll prolly win this.....

Ike 12-23-04 06:06 PM

lol @ kilo for voting for coopa cause he had more personal.....lol i had more dumbass....he didnt have any except for sayin i was from clarksville....geez learn how to vote

Coopa Bang 12-23-04 06:14 PM

yo Ike stop tryin to sway niggaz votes lol....still uppin

Coopa Bang 12-23-04 10:40 PM

god damnit still uppin......

Ike 12-24-04 12:27 AM

lol i aint swayin for votes....nobody can see this until they vote.......uppin again......

Coopa Bang 12-24-04 01:46 AM

still uppin...stop sleepin...Leave link and ill return da favor

Coopa Bang 12-24-04 04:48 AM

uppin....dont sleep on dis shit...votes will be return...leave link

Coopa Bang 12-24-04 01:51 PM

uppin...come on shit...dony sleep on dis


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