Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN

ok ok It was a very good and close battle
it actually came down really to like whats between the lines if you no what i mean.
Wicked: definally a nice verse with a good flow and nice style. The rhyme scheme was definally on the whole time. however i heard a few played out lines and the rhyme were kind of simple. but i did see so mults in there that worked well. You did say faggot alot so i guess some parts got streched. Now there were some good punches and some bad ones: i mean i ain't feeling the rattle one. The personal were there: even though you kept calling him a faggot. I like your word play. overall i think you could have done better but still raw. 7.5/10

Parallel: you also had a nice flow and a very nice style. You also had a good rhyme scheme the whole time and i think that your rhymes were... well more complex. I saw less mults from you but it still sound pretty good when i did it. but i found alot of your punches were like just grapsing for straws they were kinda wack and one bad punch can fuck up a whole verse so.... as for personals you had some that werre good a creative but overall lacing something. also i don't understand why you put some things in bold. 6/10

Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN

eh but came really weak here in my opinion ive seen better but i think wicked got this in all aspects, his flow was better at had a couple punches that were better...parallels punches just didnt hit as hard or at all though...they were too simple but parallel had a higher vocab...

good luck to both no hate but i think wicked got this for better flow and punches

peace

^correction in the beginning its "both" came weak here not but

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lmao i love how Parallel aint uppin this...... dont talk shit to me fool cause u got owned

lol..im uppin this....im playing mba live alot latly...and plus theres no point in upppin a battle when your versign a dick rider...so leave me alone little bitch..i straight owned you....you didnt even use punches or wordplay so shut your mouth

^wordplay isnt needed and his punches were harder then yours...half of your verse is threats...not punches, read it over

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Voted For: WICKEDCLOWN

iight i'ma break this down....

wickedclown - hard ass punchez an mad personalz i wuz feelin this shit didn't have many multiz but still came hard u had okay metaphores vocab wuz pretty decent overall u had a pretty dope verse felt ur flow wuz tight ur barz were almost xactly tha same an ur structure iz good as hell felt this verse more so then i felt parallelz verse

para - ur verse wuz pretty good 2 but u had weak punchez an personalz u didn't come wit ur nomal dope ass metaphores so u ain't get it this time but ur verse had nice flow an structure vocab wuz decent also but u gotta step ya game up homie wicked elevated like krazii an u seem 2 be stayin at tha same level but nice verse tho

yeahh my vote = wicked clown