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Voted For: Chaos
LMFAO This battle was whack as hell, seriously. Trig- ugh, sooo streched and soooooo weak of punches it was terrible, first bar was more than likely a fake personal but blah, second was worded horribly but a decent concept, third was old, fourth was lime OMFG whack, last was jus regualr whack. Z-No no no no no. Just wtf was that? momma jokes? you remind me of an extremely whack ass wanna be version of troop's old style, horrific son. im not breaking down bars but none were punches, none were even close... So v-Trig |
^wtf........why did this battle get re-opend.....fucking faggot....what ever i still won...lol...
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Voted For: Chaos
Aight I'ma Break It Down.. Chaos: 6/10 Not The Best From You, Your Punches Seemed Forced...Blah...But You Didn't Need Too Much To Beat The Guy You Were Facing. Zeke: 4/10 Um...Well All Your Bars Lacked Nice Concepts and Those Were The Worst Worded Punches Ever. Please Elevate Before Battling Again. Winner: Chaos, For Better Punches, Metaphors, Concepts, and Overall Verse. ~R~ Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Chaos
Shrek: your flow was a little bit punches. but the wordplay might have structure the flow into punches. next time punch the structure you idiot. Chaos: A little bit of flowing was into this. about 92 i'd say. apparently. punches. wordplay was that. this was that. I'm wearing a hat. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Zeke
damn... the punches and personals were on point n this one and clearly gave you the edge.... my vote goes to zeke on superior personals and punches Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^gonna get DQ .....mos def a dick ride...and if not....unexplained.....uppin to finish this....~1~
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Voted For: Chaos
Zeke... okay both of your stcutres was fucked up in this one your flow i wasnt really feeling it along with your pucnhes they seemed week to me... you didnt really seem toi be with it this battle and i think that is why you lost Chaos... your punches was good i felt that your tryed more and your flow was better also./.. your punches hit and they stuck only thing i gotta give you a hint on is not to explain your bars it kinda offends the voters cause you like callin them stupid when you do that |
uppin for some fucking votes...and stop fucking re-opening this battle fuck head...its been re-opened 3 times....damn...
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Voted For: Chaos
Chaos Sounds Like I Cee At Tha Circus.. You Attempt To Spit But Ya Sign Says Out Of Service.. I'll Leave My Mark On Your Rekord With Lyrical Scriptures.. Cus You Beatin Me Is Imaginative Like Disney Pictures.. Your Skill Is Like Retards In Math Tryin Ta Solve Intergers.. I Flipped Tha Swith On This Bitch Puttin Him Out Like Light Fixtures.. ^^^^^^^^^^^^Aight i like this part good punches nice lil wordplay in there put some personals though. Like Hydraulics Ill Have You Bouncing Down Tha Street.. Cus When I Grab Tha Mic I Help Out Tha Beat.. Theas No Rythm In This Gangsta Like Snoop Cd.. Hes Life Iss Based On What He Cees On Tv.. You Insests Fag Your Ya Brothers Lover.. I Fucked Your Mother In Ya Household Im Known As A MotherFucker.. Mentally Im Crossin Him Over Like Tha Proffesor And Hot Sauce.. This Uncooked Weiner Will Never Make It Ta Bieng Hot Dog.. ^^^Naw fam, punches on this part, didnt do really good fam, wordplay was good, but no personals, punches were kinda weak on this part. If "Game" Wasnt His Dad Killin A Crip He Wouldnt Inherit.. I'll Eat Of This Cracker Like A Italian Parrot.. Hommie Get Abused 4rm Tha Verbals,Duckin Like Turtals.. Leave You Shakin More Than A Jello Commercial.. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^Lol. nice closer, overall this verse had some up and downs. I'll Rip And Dismantle Ya Whole Crew-And whip All Of You With Belts!!..... Cuz This Kid Is So Wack-He Had To Get A Couple Winz....OFF HIMSELF..... I'm Suprised!!-This Bitch Should Have Been Caught!!......,. Like His Crew-All The Admins And mods Are Falling Apart!!..... Your Not Dope Enough To Roll With The Best Crew!!..... The Only Reason We Called You Out-Is Cuz We Had Nothing Better TO DO!!..... ^^^^^^^^^^^ ILL WORDPLAY AND PUNCHES AND NICE PERSONALS You And Your Whole Crew-Is The Fucking Wack Attack!!!..... Like Nerds Trying To Forget About Science-This Kid Needs To Forget About Rap!..... And While You And Your Crew-Is Trying To Figure What Happened!..... M.A.B Will Be Watching-And Like Carson Droping A Good Verse-We'll Be Laughing!!....... ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^O aight fam, nice punches, good wordplay, and nice personals overall=zeke you got an good verse, with punches and flow, lil wordplay going on in there, but you didnt had personals, as for the punches it werent really hard hitting, your verse was kinda on balance (had some up's and downs). Chaos, you had an good verse.Nice punches and ill wordplay fam, personals too. Elevate on struture fam, dont use CAPITALS in your verse. i Give this too chaos overall better punches and personals, zeke sorry fam, but your punches wasnt really hard hitting as his, plus he had wordplay's and personals too. Flow definetly goes to Zeke,But the punches and personals, wordplay really goes to chaos. Choas elevate on struture. Zeke- elevate on using personals, punches. PEACE Chaos RTF |
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