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This was feedback posted for anxiety
 

...checkin' the polls gentlemen...^^^UPPIN'!!!^^^

s.v.

This was feedback posted for Socrates
 

stupid dope both of you. i think soc took it but im just checkin to see whats up

Voted For: anxiety

anxiety: I absolutely LOVE your approach on the topic because it's all truth and so easy for all of us to relate to.

It's the one thing you seeked, what you aimed to get...
The hardest part of rap is to gain respect...
^your ending says it all...

Like how the story progressed: on top, down to earth, top of ya game...and so on and so forth. Found good balance with your vocab and had your flow on lock, structure was nice. Was a very good read because it kept you focussed throughout the whole thing, showed us how quick these things can change. Had this "in your face" attitude, just telling it how it is which I was feeling for sure! Tight piece...


Socrates: you had a dope approach on topic as well, allowed you to use more emotion than the twist anxiety gave to it. Vocab was nice, not too basic but not too complicated either so it remained easy to follow. Story progressed real well even though everything happened quite fast in the part in middle. The ending was quite well even though you might have had somewhat stronger emotion there but overall,it was raw and good.

So we were the average perfect couple, left others envious
Thats when the flock of vulture like rumors began to circle us
^like these lines, especially the "average perfect couple", it's like a contradictio in terminis...

In the end, my vote goes to anxiety because I liked his approach of the topic a little more because it's easier for everyone to relate to and has such a sense of reality but both did really well!

This was feedback posted for Socrates
 

.................................. good both... upping for you cuz i'm bored... hey hoe's wanna battle me

Soc, In text? < You know I won't complain bout d/r or make a beef thread if I lose lol ;)
Anxiety, In topical?
Soc, damn, stay on msn when you get on, instead of signing off right away

This was feedback posted for Socrates
 

I just wanna check the polls..

Good battle indian boys.

This battle is now officially...

Gay

This was feedback posted for Socrates
 

dayum... this shit is still opened?

Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnn nnnnnnnnnnnggggggggggggg

This was feedback posted for Socrates
 

you suk dick socrates.................................

Voted For: Socrates

im giving this to u because i think there was more emotion in this peice and i could realate to it i guess
flow was good imagery was good just work on ur vocab
anx urs was good to but work on ur vocab ur imagery was there but it wasnt as powerful as soc good battle to both though
props

This was feedback posted for anxiety
 

checkin pollz .

This was feedback posted for anxiety
 

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Voted For: anxiety

Socrates-WOW.This was damn good.Liked the concept.About the couple relationship thing.About the middle where he was going back home..we kinda saw the ending coming.Suicide is a lil played nowadays in topicals.But the rest was all good.Didn't see much filler..stayed on the topic.Good shit.

Anxiety-Again..WOW.This also..was damn good.I esspecialy loved the topic.With the whole rap thing.Speccialy since all of us here can relate to that.So creativity was a full blow out..in your favor.I liked the transition in your verse too.Didn't see any fillers.But I think you got this for creativity

Vote-Anxiety
RTF BELOW....(It's topical as well :thumbup:)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206909