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Voted For: Viscosity


Wow Both You Had A Decent Drop, Both Of You Hade Some Good Vocabulary In Here Stayed On The Topic And Never Fell Of Once, Both Had Good Structure, More Thought Was Put Into V's Verse Though He Had Some Decent Shit In His Verse, More Feeling Then Acuity, Don't Get Me Wrong He Had A Decent Verse Also But I Got To Give This One To V

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Voted For: Acuity

SHIT 4 real homie vote gotta g o2 acuity................... he had gud rhymes and it made me think of the starvin people around the world ........... the best line wuzAwaking to see your kids rib-cage, because his skin hangs off him like he got the plague
Burying many before they come of age, disease florishes, 15per day die of AIDS
Fuck aid, governement keeps it, they living large cos they getting paid
^^^^^^^^^^^^ gud i really liked that it wuz really eye openin,............. a 9/10 yo Visocity u had tooo many simple shit increase your vocab dawg.............................. i rest my case

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Voted For: Acuity

this was very very close in my opinion props to both...

beginning/ending-acuity, this was a close aspect, i thought acuitys intro was good because of the words used it didnt jump directly into the whole thing it shad good transition and the ending was pretty much a tie both had a good meaningful ending

emotion-acuity, i thought it had a lot more emotion put into it even though this was close...acuitys story felt deeper, the vocab brought this out also

imagery-viscosity, thought the words viscosity used brought out the imagery aspect really well it was a lot easier for me to see what was happening and keep me intuned with what you were talking about

flow-viscosity, just had a better flow basically and i liked how everything was constructed with rain, animal perspective, and childs perspective...i thought that was good

vocab-acuity, basically had a higher vocab and like i said before it brought out more emotion...but it messed up the flow in some parts

this was a really good battle both had their good and bad parts but in the end i was just feelin acuity had a better verse no hate good luck to both

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