Voted For: ol'dirtymexican

Explanation:

Flow was ok in both verses, punchlines wuz tight... tie again, structure all good by both, personals not creative, talkin bout creativity.. ol'dirty had mo creativity, multi's neva played, vocab fucked up....... nameplay, had a bit from dopium.
oldirty won cuz he had mo punchlines, n mo creative shit

V/ ol`dirty mexican

RTF!!!!!!!!!!!! battles on my sig:...................... and expect mo HONEST votes...

Voted For: Dopium

U aint gettin into P.S.A ill make ya whole vision turn grey
Got ya name from a famous rapper O.D.B u fake ass emcee
^^^didn't rhmye
Tryin out for Psa and heavy hittas at the same time
ya shit is confusing like trying to understand a mime
^^OK...but kinda played
bitch ill 'infect' ya causing retardedness in ya mind
Your as wack as that bitch Marilyn 'Manson'
^^too basic
fuckin with me will cause ya head to spin
when u get merked its gonna be 'end of days'
^^^didn't rhyme
u wont be shit if u change ur name to 'johnny blaze'
merking me is like a retard goin through a maze
^^whack

Only half-decent punchline was the one with mimes.The rest was basic.U can't just say"U worse than Mayirllyn".U gotta be more complex.Wordplay and metas.


your skills r a myth like asians wit asses
ill murdah u bitch have u turned bac 2 ashes
^^self glorify
im a real G u kno i stay high and
ya verse iz even smaller than wut ya bitch is ridein
^^whack...elementary diss
keep fuckin wit me n git ya throat cut
ill have ya takin shots like ya do in tha butt
^^self glorified
eryone kno u fresh wit homo ass niggas
'n' tha mex dont bet wit normal ass figgas
^^self glorified
when u hit tha streets, u cuddle tha cock
but when im steppin out, its ta hustle tha block
^^self gloriry
yea im 0-2 ,call it tha written curse
but it bout ta git broke ,spittin dis verse
^^dun bring up losing record

Okay....you self glorified too much.Focus on dissin and nothing more.Add some metas and wordplay.If ya got a losing record....hide it and dun mention it.

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