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EastCoast 12-27-04 11:39 PM

This was feedback posted for BLACK~MAGIK
 
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B. Magik 12-28-04 06:10 PM

Uppin for votes on this battle!!!!! Quit sleeping on this RV!!

B. Magik 12-28-04 10:11 PM

Uppin this bitch!! Will somebody please fucking vote?!?! Jesus Christ!!

B. Magik 12-29-04 01:46 PM

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Uppin This Goddamnit!!!!!!!!

B. Magik 12-29-04 05:34 PM

Will one of you fucking rv assholes please fucking vote on this shit?!?! Jesus Christ! I will return the fuckin favor!!! Uppin!!

Kyleon 12-29-04 05:39 PM

Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

OK battle
Structure im givin dat to BM i could read his betta and since i could read his betta he had betta flow...Punches were weak in my opponion both ways...Vocab goes to BM..personals N Multis i say a tie but leanin towards Bm..Metas go to BM

overall a close battle...This battle was alright.

v/Black~Magik

Kyleon 12-29-04 05:40 PM

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Also Known. 12-29-04 06:41 PM

Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

hands down magik got this other dude was talkin non sense and black had some funny lines which made him win this lil d needs to elevate

Affinity 12-29-04 07:46 PM

Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

lil d
im not sure what that was but your stucture made my eyes bleed.....try and wokr on some stuctureizing the verse and use more wittyness of uses of punchlines and wordplay...lol....but your vocabulary was weak and all that your hole thing was weak sry no hate but go elevate pz

BlackMagic
hmm alright verse your stucturing was better but it still was weak....you used some good wordplay and your punches were locked.....you used some good vocabulary in all it was all good, good verse n all you took this simply...no hate to both of you pz

return the favour links in the sig


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