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Voted For: L.I.
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Voted For: LyLWuN
Good Battle.I Saw Some Tight Personas Coming From Both Sides.But Im Gon Wit LylWun On This.She Had The Stronger Punches And The Personals Had More Effect Too.LI Personals Were Good But They Seemed Typical & Expected Since He Was Battlin A Girl. Vote-LyLWun |
Voted For: L.I.
Aight...LI Took This One.. L.I. Just Plain Out Dissed Her Harder and Took The More Personal Approach... While LyLWun Tried To Use A Lot of Diffrent Scenarios From This Site To Use Against LI. Plus Sum of Her Lines/Bars Didn't Rhyme..and Your Structure Is Horrid. Vote - LI For Better Overall Verse, Especially Punches. ~R~ |
this kid like an angry mexican, cuz 'I' see is this (el)'L' in this battle comin up short in form,
u messed with the wrong girl, or u didnt know who TO-PIC, uh yea....ALMOST PORN// (1sr line yes....2nd nah) remember that? perverted it seems and a topical head? u a false-rhymer, battlin me? i guess u didnt know 'what u was in for' like IN-MATES with ALZHEIMERS// (nice wordplay points) this aint ya day, pimpin....wow this man can do topicals! seems he stay bitchin, 52 and 9? but check this out imma 'scratch ya record' like dj's mixin// (k) how u conjure up them wins? i guess 'gatorades' not all thats in u, u stuck with the pipe inside-ya// no wonder why this site is called RV, yall got nothin but ridaz// (weak ender....but k) sum- u had some wordplay in there....few personals.....flow was off a lil.....no multis...u had some lines that made me go ooh...complexity was there....punches were above avg.... Quit ridin on L.I. I'm tired of it.. just simply lay off me bitch... But since sex makes a winner.. its no wonder she's all over my dick... (k...weak opener) Battling the best.. you gotta be crazy if you plan on makin a name... Cuz you made it prefectly clear that your name describes your brains... (k...nice one) Cut the cockiness bitch.. your ranked high among the greats, still takin flight?... Cause last time I saw.. you didnt even make it into Legends on yo Home Site!... (ehh...k) Sorry I had to merk the "best" from RW.. cause this "vet" aint even alright... Bitch, the only time you were on top.. was in bed wit strobe last night... (weak ender) sum- wheres the complexity....wheres the thought in the rhymes??? oh well whateva...eh ur verse was pretty basic......u had personals but nuthin strong or what i havent seen before......no multis...no hard hittin punches......no wordplay.......nothin made me go oohh or wow......flow was cool tho its evident lylwun took time to put thoughts in her verse....had complexity and personals......cool shyt.... v- lylwun d.a. |
Voted For: L.I.
decent battle and pretty close but ima give it to LI since he had better punches and had a better flow and was wittier with his personals.lyl wun has to fix her strutcure cuz its really hard to flow with and its like if u went over the line limit. so both came decent but LI takes this |
oh yea...return the favor in my sig. thx............
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This was feedback posted for L.I.
me no vote.................................I just wanna see who won:) and up
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Voted For: L.I.
LylWuns Verse this kid like an angry mexican, cuz 'I' see is this 'L' in this battle comin up short in form, u messed with the wrong girl, or u didnt know who TO-PIC, oh yea....ALMOST PORN// i get it but it was just weak like ...ok... remember that? perverted it seems and a topical head? u a false-rhymer, battlin me? i guess u didnt know 'what u was in for' like IN-MATES with ALZHEIMERS// i liked this one... this aint ya day, pimpin....wow this man can do topicals! seems he stay bitchin, 52 and 9? but check this out imma 'scratch ya record' like dj's mixin// no...dj mixin shit is played and setup was eh... how u conjure up them wins? i guess 'gatorades' not all thats in u, u stuck with the pipe inside-ya// no wonder why this site is called RV, [url=http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=168603]yall got nothin but ridaz// nope... overall had 1 good punch in my opinion but weak verse... L.I.s verse Quit ridin on L.I. I'm tired of it.. just simply lay off me bitch... But since sex makes a winner.. its no wonder she's all over my dick... eh it was ok in my opinion nothin too great Battling the best.. you gotta be crazy if you plan on makin a name... Cuz you made it prefectly clear that your name describes your brains... ...ok gettin better Cut the cockiness bitch.. your ranked high among the greats, still takin flight?... Cause last time I saw.. you didnt even make it into Legends on yo Home Site!... lmfao...best punch and personal of the verse... Sorry I had to merk the "best" from RW.. cause this "vet" aint even alright... Bitch, the only time you were on top.. was in bed wit strobe last night... wasnt as good as the last bar but good closer and punch none the less... overall had better punches and hit harder then lylwuns... no hate good luck to both peace |
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