upppin dis battle.....favors WILL be returned..............

ippin,damn we in the same crew now.................

Voted For: Judicial

ahahahahha wit ya words splurred and ya visions blurred
how u expect ur vocal cords to deliver verbs
from a cookie i refuse to see da harshness of defeat
ur crews a joke,only think u hittin heavy iz ya meat
i install horrifying thoughts and disturbing content
you winnin dis battle,kid da shit is non-sense
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ hey ha yo dawg hands dwn u ate oreo............................ yo yo had alrite punches decent flow and aiight structure.......oreo u just didnt come hard,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, on the day he won gud shit holla bak wif some votes in my batte against kkkhater

what the fuck with these votes man, i had the better vese shit is pissing me offed, i battle to many big people to lose this shit

This was feedback posted for oreo
 

checking polls.

who do you think i am??u talkin bout big people..i aint no rookie...i aint been here since what my thang say i got 3 screen names and 3 alias' but i only use one now the other ones are deleted now i think....so dont b talkin bout dat if u dont know bout dat....

anywayz....uppin dis battle..............................

Voted For: Judicial

judicial.......
opener
yo ima lyricaly master mind in da art of verbal abuse
i spit words to dismantle ur verbs and down ya cincinnati roots
good personal....pretty good opener

killer
wit ya words splurred and ya visions blurred
how u expect ur vocal cords to deliver verbs
lol...pretty good....hit good

from a cookie i refuse to see da harshness of defeat
ur crews a joke,only think u hittin heavy iz ya meat
well...jack off jokes are played...but somehow this one was decent cuz it played off his crew name....and it hit pretty good

i install horrifying thoughts and disturbing content
you winnin dis battle,kid da shit is non-sense
ok...not anything great...but it was decent

closer
this kid now lays in his crib cryin/screamin diein from feeling
oreo couldnt look down on me if he was crucified 2 da celing
lol nice closer...hit hard

oreo..............
qiut being pussy, really you should man up you hoe
a petriedfied ludacris, you to scared to stand up to oreo
ok wordplay...but still seemed too simple...hit decent though

our battle got deleted now there is no delaying,
do you got a hole in your tounge cuz i can see through what you saying
decent....could have been worded better and made more complex

just battleing me hurts the brain, maybe im not sain
cuz just accepting gets you fucked up like sex on an airplaine
good wordplay...1st line not good though

judial you aint really rappeing you just babbling,
battle done like kobe in court, i put down the javelin
hmm ok...nothin great

your easily breakable like a hammer to glass
if your heart was enbedded in my but thats the only way you could be beat"in" my ass
streched as fuck....but good concept...hit good...good closer


ok this was really a hard decision to make...but when i break it down more....
vocab-judicial killed him on it
complexity-judicial killed him on this too
multis-neither one
punches- about a tie..but i felt with judicial being more complex that they hit somewhat harder....

i also felt that judicial stay more consistent through his verse....where oreo had about 2 bars that werent as good as his others.....return the favor judicial....links in sig

Voted For: Judicial

Judicial won this...

Judicial -- got some personals in there...structure was meh, though. Harder punches... way hard.

Oreo - Your punches need to elevate a lot. Your closer was creative... lmao. Very.

Butr Judicial gets my vote for an overall better verse.

uppin............................. nothin bout you judicail i had a bad day

iight.....UPPIN DIS BATTLE....all favors will be returned just drop a link...

Voted For: Judicial

lol man judicial verse was funny as his structure was tight heavy-punches dat i couldnt carry shit was fire

PLEASE RETURN DA FAVOR LINKS IN DA SIG