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Awe, I know this nigga ain't just do a hate vote...Don't gimme that shit. I'm gone shred yo punk ass now. Really...it's ova.. Kiss the site good-bye faggot.
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yo, this battle wus tight, both of yall came wit some good punchs, the battle wus pretty much even the whole way, but the line about ya bithch goin home with me swayed my vote, to me it wus one of the most creative lines ive seen
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Punchs-nef Metas-nef Multis-nef Vocab-nef rhyme scheme-1ne flow 1ne flow, yoru verse was basic.. with alot of playd punchs.. RHyme scheme was good on it, alot, and i mean ALOT better than Nefs, but your metaphors lackd some(to many playd ones) and your punchs werent that harder hitting.. Nef you came iight.. metaphors were working for you, but your bars are really to long.. Shorten then up to flow better, thatll help im tellin you.. Punchs werent bad.. your verse has possiblities.. hit me up on aim - "Tha rar one" vote= Nefarious lev one |
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Nef rippt 1ne flow with more complex rhyme scheme, punches, multis, and flow... overall Nef's verse was better.
VOTE: Nefarious Leviathan. Keep at it, and keep elevatin'...1 |
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yo u won kid ight nice battlin u dawg i appreciate it
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