yo nice shit, nice flow. i think u shood keep tha last verse, i liked it. check out my open mic "straight gangsta shit" http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1869260 werd

thisll prolly be my last up if i get some feed

ok, wen i get one more feed ill stop uppin......... but its gotta be a decent one

shit was hot. nice vocab and structure.i loved tha flow. it was off the charts. keep doing ya thing people. 10/10.

shit was hot 10/10...4real

thanx for the love yall....... im alil pissed tho that i only got 2 thousand posters givin feed..... i mean, no hate to any of yall ( u might even be aliases) but there are juss some cats who have seen hundreds and wont give 10's out so much.... i dont wanna think i have a chance at an OM of the month sometime soon without gettin some feed by someone who had one once.......

Its Not That Easy 2 Say Goodbye /believe Me Someday Maybey Ill Figure Out Why/ Tryin Ta Raze My Little Girl An Become A Good Father / Tha Last Thirty Dayz Ive Gottin Stronger/ Goin Ta Court For Custody / Lifes To Short Weres Tha Rest Of Me/ I Pray 2 God Everthings Gonna Be Ok/ What More Can I Say To Make This Pain Go Away Cb83

^^huh??????????????????????

Id Like Ta Take A Miniute Ta Share A Thought/ I Dont Care If Ya Feel It Or Not/tha Mistakes We Make Create /some Of Are Hate/if We Could Just Find Piece It Ed Be Great But When Your Times Up An Your 2 Late /tha Rhymes Fucked Up But It Took 2 Sec To Make Cb83

^^^^ wrong forum buddy :thumbup:

u have 24 hours to drop a link with proper feed back.....
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170871

im just doing my job........

I thought fuxjusaword first was coo..........regular vocab but coo rhyme scheme
nice multies.......it was deceint


didnt really like kilo's verse.............i didnt the bars at the end of each line.......
and the verse overall.........was kinda boring...........

like the third verse.........was a lil stretch but ok...........liked the multeis......
structer was kool to......

overall it was deceint drop............good job.........

huh? i thought we dropped links tha day dis was posted

fuck yeah i dropped 2 links cuz it was like tha 5th post in dis thread...........

^yea look alil farther down the first page..... ull see em.....