Voted For: Kordozar

Kord takes this one no doubt his structure was better, he had better flow his rhyming was better his opener-closure was iight. But I could understand him better in this battle here is how I graded it.

kord

This Kids Style Iss Worn Like Tha Rubber On A Flat Tire..
Rascalfire23: i try to teach peopl,Loss Ta Empire As A Rookie Guess His Teaching Backfired....
Despite His Aim Name,He Wont Beat Me By A "Hair"Fuckin Lil Rascal..
Me Goin Ova Tha Lines Iss Tha Onli Way You'll Win Tha Battle..
Dudes A Homo His Mouth Holds More Sacks Than D.Freeney...
Attemptin Ta Be "Hot Dog",Still On Tha Skill Level Of A Weenie..
9/10

ARCH

Brush off my shoulders so this kids eatin my dust..
told him we should get together..*
... he pounced on me with lust..
Low posts, low record, didn't read my danger signs..
You could come after this ruler..
..but still Couldn't back up his lines..
I do feel for this joke, but still leave him dead in a hole
9.6/10 keep elevating homes u almost had it I think

and hey hit up on my links peace.

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ok he can shut the fuck up straight away..
he said you took this one but give me a higher rating of the battle.
and is structure was wank thats only used for Topicals & Poetry & OM.
Herb Voters Is Why People Retire.
Pz.

Voted For: Kordozar

i think ko kam out on top on dis i mean both yall elivatein like hell but he had better punches n i was feelin the flow. but ar u was pretty tight in this on to but i jus think ko was a lil better but good battle yall gl wit the elevatin

Voted For: Kordozar

Archeoligist you had nice punches that was some good hitters for you so i like that u need more personals u need more work on that to be profected u had some hard lines some we're fillers and you chould hav came harder

IP:


Brush off my shoulders so this kids eatin my dust..
told him we should get together..*
... he pounced on me with lust..
Good 7/10
Low posts, low record, didn't read my danger signs..
You could come after this ruler..
..but still Couldn't back up his lines..
Ok 6/10
I do feel for this joke, but still leave him dead in a hole
Closest he came to dope..
.....was his name next to mine in the poll...
Common 5/10
Fall inline with the losers another of the masses..
And if success is in the eye of the beholder...
.... your stuck wearing glasses..
Good 7/10
Kordozar shud no "i dunt play with Light Weights" usualy..
You couldnt see the Dream Team...
If you fell asleep whilst logged on to Rv dream team screen..
chould have had a better closer 6/10

Overall Arche. 31/50 Good battle

Kordozar yea u had great punches personals we're off the top anyway ur structure chould of Been better allthough u can work on ur vocab i kno this is elavation so good battle u need alil workk

IP:


This Kids Style Iss Worn Like Tha Rubber On A Flat Tire..
Rascalfire23: i try to teach peopl,Loss Ta Empire As A Rookie Guess His Teaching Backfired....
ha funny great 9/10
Despite His Aim Name,He Wont Beat Me By A "Hair"Fuckin Lil Rascal..
Me Goin Ova Tha Lines Iss Tha Onli Way You'll Win Tha Battle..
ok 6/10
Dudes A Homo His Mouth Holds More Sacks Than D.Freeney...
Attemptin Ta Be "Hot Dog",Still On Tha Skill Level Of A Weenie..
haha 9/10
Rv Dream Team?He Wass Koed By Dopeman Like A Thieving Addict..
Being A Queer Is Hiss Habit His Families Full Of Faggits,So Iss No More Room In Tha Closet Kid Hass Ta Come Out Tha Addict...
good 1 8/10
He's A Known Masterbator,So His "Palm" Comes In "Hand"y...
To Soft Ta Be A Pussy,Rascalfire23: haha ino,Tha British Version Of Punnani...... ok 6/10

good battle u get the vote 36/50 good batle -1-