murkz if i'm so whack why haven't you posted on our battle? huh? what up now? i smell a ko!

this battle was whack!

Voted For: <..8..>

8 won this battle but both of yall need a lot of work. 8 had better punches, flow and structure. try to put more multies in if u can. 90% of osiris' verse didnt make sense to me idk maybe ijm just slow but his punches didnt really hit or make sense
holla at me
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Voted For: Os1ris

very close battle....i was juss checkin out my oppenent but it aint look too good fo him...lol
TOO bad.
I THINK os1ris won dis battle, because his punches hit harder and he had the better personals. not to mention the betta vocab.
v/os1ris

*yawn*uppin this thing once more ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Voted For: Os1ris

OS gets this he had allright strucutre and his hits where kind of harder but I just think he came harder and hey keep elevating homes iight.

OS

This kid has nothing against me so he's already at a loss/
This guys useless like whoopi goldberg usin dental floss/
My verse aint that good but to your its great/
Leave this guys stomach on the sidewalks the only way he can carry his own weight/
So sit back relax and enjoy this consistent tongue lashin/
Slicin this guy up so bad the coroner gotta investigate in fractions/
This guy should have went first because he aint seein me later/
7.5/10

eight

this guy made many mistakes, he shoulda stayed-away/
i'll leave you like allen iverson, the way you fade-away/
the battle we partakin in is like a poodle fightin a pit/
you gonna get ate alive, some one come pick him outta my shit/
sorry ass nicca, i think he need a little bit of affection/
cause the way he starin at my lil pic i think he gettin an erection/
6.9/10

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