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This was feedback posted for ChaoticStealth
 

yo that shit u spittin didn't make sense i shoot verses till i leave u dense and dis just tha beginnin of my legacy i sell what chu but u steady beggin me tellin me to give it free naw buddy it don't come that easily

scary azz niggaz
 

man ya'll some scary azz niggaz ya'll don't beef wit me cuz u get buried fast nigga i eat niggaz like manwhich in rappin ya'll really aint no challenge so if ya'll wanna quit being scary some body challenge me and huury

Voted For: Acuity

FLow: both
enjoyed: Acuity
Multiz: none
Punches: Acuity
Openor: Acuity
Closer: acuity
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Acuity:

Flow 10/10
Punches: 7/10
Openor: 8/10
Closer: 7/10
Enjoyed: 10/10
Total: 42/50
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Stealth:
Flow: 8/10
Punches: 5/10
Openor: 8/10
Closer: 8/10
enjoyd: 8/10
Totl: 37/50

Vote for Acuity cuz he had just a betta verse

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thanks for the vote lethal, I enjoyed the constructive criticism

Voted For: Acuity

i thought this battle was ight. i give it to acuity tho. his verse wasn't all that hot. flow was mad f'd up for this one. but he had a better punches sort off and way better vocab.
chaoticc's verse was ok but didnt really come wit any hot punches or multies. failed attempts at personals from both tho work on those
get back at wack!
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I hated this battle.. please check my other battle.. one where i actually came with it decent
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Voted For: Acuity

Acuity:
decent drop from you, looks like u been elevating more since tha last time i faced you, but anyway, u had a some pretty decent punches there too, structure was in place & not all-stretched-out, the flow kinda lacked but its was aight...but overall u had a decent drop though keep workin on yo skillz kid...

Chaotic...all i have to say to you is elevate more, ur drop was weak...

RTF Acuity

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Voted For: Acuity

Acuity gets this one no doubt he just came harder no hate,
his wordplay was better he had better strucutre his flow was better and some of ur words where just overplayed but keep elevating homes I am also and the opener and closure goes to acuity also so overall its acuity.

ACUITY
Dont test this G, ill stiffle you leave u shook like every muscle has got atrophy
ChaoticStealth hiphop and ur not shit, only evidence of that is when uve bit, like in ur sig
Ur rhymes are played, seems to be a problem wid noob's rhymes on RV today
Stealthy like noises from banging percussion, cos i saw u comin in emcee introductions
Shouldn't have accepted my proposal, ur lines belong in the garbage disposal
Rhymes are so wack u must have a mental afflcition,ur rap name is a complete
9/10


Ayo acuity I checked ya soundlick, didnt know what you was talkin about
Is that a British accent or is that just a cock in ya mouth?/
Callin me out, I'll be the judge and rule ya whole jury*
You hoes with herpes catch my flows and surely be left in surgery/
From my fury, if not,judge these nuts fuh me
Stupid, but I give ya props nice name Acuity
But your face looks like a squirrel that just hit puberty/
Illusively, I'll deface your words waste ya verbs and make sure you heard,if

6.4/10