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Voted For: Hammer

okay i was gonna break this down till i read deaths verse to much self glorification in it to bother hammer gets this for actually going after his opponent and that ford line hahaha hammered to death loved it.... aight then enough said hammer = vote

displosive must be confused....

Voted For: Hammer

Death

this lil noobie just dont know/
im tight my flow keeps flowing like H2O/
^self-glorification: big no-no!

ill use my punchlines to break this nigga down to size/
fuckin around with me is a death wish and your bout to meet your demise/
^no punch

ill own this nigga with lyrical domination/
im real and your just a fake imatation/
^it'll do i guess

Weak drop in fact, had some lines who got potential of good punch or personal but it didn't came out that way. Vocab was good, structure could be slighty better though, just elevate...read other battles...no hate...


Hammer

Im not black or a rascist, he said im a nigger, I hate that
Dont make me bigger to say ur a wigger, u probaly aint black
^decent opener

Your Original Crap, its gay like you enamored with Seth*
Like you a toy, i play with you, you get hammered to death
^okay okay

Thinks he’s death himself causing plagues of locus**
Caught you staring at a ford for an hour cos it said “focus”
^nice closer

Overall good drop, maybe some more bold things in there but it's all good...Vocab, structure n flow were tight, nothing really bad in here, just keep on doing your thing!

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Voted For: Hammer

Hammer gets this one aint nothin specail he just came harder and had more personels his opener-closure was better he had more vocab and better multis in his you just need to elevate on ur rhyming and multis and most of all vocab no hate tho.




Im not black or a rascist, he said im a nigger, I hate that
Dont make me bigger to say ur a wigger, u probaly aint black

Your Original Crap, its gay like you enamored with Seth*
Like you a toy, i play with you, you get hammered to death

Thinks he’s death himself causing plagues of locus**
Caught you staring at a ford for an hour cos it said “focus”
hammer: 8.8/10


this lil noobie just dont know/
im tight my flow keeps flowing like H2O/

ill use my punchlines to break this nigga down to size/
fuckin around with me is a death wish and your bout to meet your demise/
5.4/10 keep elevating