UPPPPIN THIs thing fo sho. Lez get sum more votes

Voted For: xcell

d-cept!ions verse - you verse flowed well, different, since it was more or less Gods power. vocab was good multis were good tho. such as:
"We seemed doomed to be consumed by death/
But the clouds clear, exume a new breath/"

probably the best lines in ur verse

xcells verse - also flowed well, but he was more on topic. he wrote more about God personally. vocab/multis lacked a little bit and it also felt rushed.


vote = d-cept!ion

damn, im an ass...i meant to out the vote for d-cept!on. shit...

uppin............................./.................................

Uppin this shit fo sho. Cmon people vote on it.......................

uppin this thing fo sho. Plzz votee.......................

Uppppin disbitch cmon people. VOte on dis. Plz I beg of u.

Uppin This Biatch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: d-cËpt!0n

ok....

D-ception......
the first thing i noticed about your verse was the vocabulary.....you used nice vocab all throughout the verse.....every bar was good ( at worst decent ) and you never fell off...the whole verse was consistent.....it was very deep and i was feelin it....structure was good...decent multis in there....overall it was a very solid verse


Xcell.................
dont capitalize your letters....it makes it annoying to read for me......you should have upped your vocab throughout the verse....it definitely wasnt a strong point.....your concepts were good as far as the topic goes....but i felt like they could have been worded better....your structure was messed up the way you had some bars in 1 line....thats not good....it was a decent verse i just felt like you could have came better


overall..............
dception wins this with better vocab, structure, and consistence.....i just felt his more than i did xcells.....xcells wasnt complex enough........return the favor.....links in sig

Voted For: d-cËpt!0n

Yo yo yo im really feelin da freestyle. You got talent. Lets everybody catch a glimpse of da apocalypse. Keep it up cuz.

Voted For: d-cËpt!0n

diz was a ok but my picc goes like diz here:
opena: d-cept!on
originality: d-cept!on
closa: d-cept
multis: d-cept
d gets da win 2 me cuz he went more into depth; & xcell u just touch da surface