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Voted For: Kordozar
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vs. nothing. meh, this was a one sided battle in my opinion. but, for the sake of adequate feedback.. Kamikazee, you really need to elevate man. Your flow was about the only decent thing in your whole verse. Your concepts were wack and not witty, your punches weren't hard hitting, and your attempted wordplay was really bad man. Kordozar, your verse was alright. It was a lot harder hitting than Kam's was in my opinion. Your concepts were wittier and you had a good personal, which I quoted. Your flow was alright.. overall though, you came much harder than your opponent. Like I said, this was a one sided battle. Kordozar just came harder in every aspect. He had better flow, punches, personals, and concepts... so for these reasons.. v/ Kordozar. |
Voted For: Kordozar
Kordozar Punches-8 Personals-7 Multies-5 Flow-5 Structure-5 Wordplay-6 Creativity-8 Opener-6 Closer-7 Overall-57 Kamikazee Punches-6 Personals-5 Multies-9 Flow-6 Structure-6 Wordplay-5 Creativity-6 Opener-7 Closer-5 Overall-55 |
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Voted For: Kordozar
lmaooooo dis shit was wun sided.....first off kami it look like u were just tryin da ryhme u wasn't dissin da nigga u aint have no punchlines or anything ya verse was just basic fam 4real..kord ya opener was betta than his whole verse and da second bar which was a personal whut more can i say u won dis shit opener-kord structure-tie punchlines-kord multis-nun wordplay-nun creativity-kord personals-kord finisher-kord enjoyed-kord..nuff said he won everything RETURN IT YA'LL LINKS R IN MY SIG... |
Voted For: Kordozar
ok i vote for u cuz u had way better flow and punches then COM did plus u had way better rhyme scheme and his was ah? so so but urs was way better now COM u need to elavate me u threw punches but they didnt seem to connect right so wat i suggest is to sit down and write shit so u can elavate your self so u dont gotta have to deal with hate threads bout u suckin and shit so over all my vote goes to Kordozar. |
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