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Tha Q 01-11-05 10:59 AM

This was feedback posted for Mad Dog
 
This Weener Dogs Time has come, but one problem,

..I don't know weather to merk him or eat 'em.
Merk Mad Dog with a DMX Mentallity,

..But I guess By Now he's used to gettin beatings.
Check The Lines "Flammable", Roast This Mutt,

^^that rhyming is atrocious....eeeeeeeew

Claims Hot, But His lines Reak a horrible Gas..
Why? 'Cause all his fire power comes from his ass..

^^^Funny but middle schoolish

Past wins inaccurate, who can refuse that humerous accent..
On a site full of kids 6 years younger hmm can someone say

^^Now that was nice...lol...and funny


22/30



Kid u gonn get circled out more than Naughts & Crosses,
70 wins impressive but people more distracted by ya losses,


^^LOL...that's hilarious

Now the bosses of 4 clippz ready to ditch this bitch,
For talkin shit and fallin quicker than collapsed clits,


^^BLAH...not good


verse me? c'mon DAWG...it's VERSUS me...dat verse me shit only works in audio

And talk about illiteracy coz ya crew initials ain't V.B,
But you're prolly in denial at being the main cause of V.D,*

^^Decent closer


this was a close battle 4 real...damn


22/30


I vote tie...so, i can't vote at all...

Mad Dog 01-12-05 04:35 AM

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Mad Dog 01-13-05 08:04 AM

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..ADLIB.. 01-13-05 09:14 AM

Voted For: Mad Dog

yes mad dog got this because of flow and punches were hitting harder with structure and killah you had wack shit that didnt even rhyme it was so wack i had to walk away from the fucking computer cause i nearly died from the fucking wackness you put into your wack verse you wack fuck.................why dont you just die you pathetic fucking loser............

Mad dog, I dont really like splitting up your bars like that, but atleast your shit wasnt wack like Killah bwoys shit was.. You had some good punches, good use of personals.. I enjoyed reading your shit..
Quote:
Originally Posted by Mad Dog
How can u be a killah? this da 3rd time u bout 2 lose verse me,
Ya 14 wit 2 failed sites rollin wit 4 twits...
........................so sayin ya dopes ya only Kontroverzey,


^Is what took the battle in my opinion..

Quote:
Originally Posted by Killah.Bwoy
This Weener Dogs Time has come, but one problem,

..I don't know weather to merk him or eat 'em.
Merk Mad Dog with a DMX Mentallity,

..But I guess By Now he's used to gettin beatings.
Check The Lines "Flammable", Roast This Mutt,

..and use His Legs for Table Supporters.
Disgrace To England, And I know It's Fact When,

..Queen Elizabeth hides when He Pulls out quarters.

Claims Hot, But His lines Reak a horrible Gas..
Why? 'Cause all his fire power comes from his ass..
That probably explains the refrigerator full of beans..
He's a Real Killer, At The dinner table,
.........he left his whole family on the murder scene..
Past wins inaccurate, who can refuse that humerous accent..
On a site full of kids 6 years younger hmm can someone say


This is what lost the battle you stupid wack fuck.. Go back to 'the ghetto' you live in where your mom buys you $10000 worth of christmas presents you fucking little rich mommas boy peice of shit..

PEACE....

50Cal. 01-13-05 10:45 AM

Voted For: Mad Dog

This Weener Dogs Time has come, but one problem,

..I don't know weather to merk him or eat 'em.
Merk Mad Dog with a DMX Mentallity,

..But I guess By Now he's used to gettin beatings.
Check The Lines "Flammable", Roast This Mutt,
OK ALL THOSE LINES AND YOU AINT RHYME YET WTF!!WACK AS FUCK 1/10

..and use His Legs for Table Supporters.
Disgrace To England, And I know It's Fact When,

..Queen Elizabeth hides when He Pulls out quarters.
OK THAT MAKES NO SENSE PUNCH AINT HIT AT ALL PULLS UT QUATERS?AND?WHY WOULD HE PULL OUT QUATERS?DID YOU JUST TRY TO RHYME WORDS?1/10

Claims Hot, But His lines Reak a horrible Gas..
Why? 'Cause all his fire power comes from his ass..
HORRIBLE NO PUNCH SOUNDS LIKE A 10 YEARS OLD JOKE 1/10
That probably explains the refrigerator full of beans..
He's a Real Killer, At The dinner table,
.........he left his whole family on the murder scene..
THAT WAS FUCKING CORNY ALSO NO PUNCH AGAIN DISS AGAIN SOUNDS LIKE A 8 YEAR OLDS JOKE NOW1/10
Past wins inaccurate, who can refuse that humerous accent..
On a site full of kids 6 years younger hmm can someone say
SHIT AINT RHYME AGAIN WTF!!NO PUNCH NO DISS EITHER1/10
5/50<<<<THIS IS QUITE POSSIBLE THE WORST VERSE IVE EVER SEEN IN ELEATED EVER NO HATE BUT DOG YOU GOTTA STEP IT UP FOR REAL

MAD DOGG
Kid u gonn get circled out more than Naughts & Crosses,
70 wins impressive but people more distracted by ya losses,
HAHA GOOD PERSONAL DECENT PUNCH HERE 7/10
Now the bosses of 4 clippz ready to ditch this bitch,
For talkin shit and fallin quicker than collapsed clits,
PLAYED AT LEAST IT RHYMED THOUGH OK DISS 3/10
How can u be a killah? this da 3rd time u bout 2 lose verse me,
Ya 14 wit 2 failed sites rollin wit 4 twits...
........................so sayin ya dopes ya only Kontroverzey,
STRECHED BUT NICE DISS AND NAME PLAY HERE 6/10
And talk about illiteracy coz ya crew initials ain't V.B,
But you're prolly in denial at being the main cause of V.D,*
NICE TRY BUT AINT REALLY CONNECT HERE 4/10
20/40<RHYMED WELL FLOWED DECENT AND HAD A FEW NICE SHOTS AT HIM IN OVERALL DECENT VERSE.

VOTE-MAD DOG OK THIS WAS EASY KONTRO HALF YOUR SHIT AINT RHYME ALL YOUR PUNCHES WERE JUST PLAYED AND CORNY AS FUCK HERE SHIT WAS THE WORST IVE EVER SEEN FOR REAL HORRIBLE WHILE MAD DOG RHYMED IN HIS WHOLE VERSE AND HAD SOME REAL NICE PUNCHES AND DISSES ON YOU AND A NICE NAMEPLAY SO THIS IS EZ VOTE MAD DOG.

BOTH PLEASE RETURN A HONEST ONE BACK ON THE LINK IN MY SIG.

Scareface 01-13-05 08:21 PM

Voted For: Mad Dog

LOL MJ at The Bottom LOL .............ohh Snap But bac to The Matter At Hand

Explanation
MD came very well wordz Werent forced Lines Looked aii Multi's were lacked A Lil But Still You did very Well And Thats why You get My Vote................Good Luck In The future


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