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uppin 4 more votes ppl

uppin 4 more votes...........

This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
 

check it marv u suck cuz if this is the marv from hiphopgame than that means u suck and got rocked by chronic in a pink slip battle u suck dawg get it straight bitch

Voted For: Vinci

Aight this was hard to decide
but both u need to elevate
Opener-Marvjay(even though it made no sense)
Flow-Vinci(both need work though
Structure- Marvjay (Vinci some of ur lines were 2 stretched)
Punches-Marvjay
Personals-Tie
Humor- Vinci
Enjoyment- Vinci
It was reall close

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

one word...merked . marv jays punches were sick and he had good structure. n some ight multies too. but mostly punches won this battle. vince i didnt like ur structure at all is was too choppy n didnt flow well. had some good multies n some ight punches but not enuff to beat marv jay
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

ok.........pretty good battle

Marvjay.........
1st bar-nice opener.....hit good....good wordplay
2nd bar-nice personal....hit hard....good bar
3rd bar-decent....hit ok....decent bar
4th bar-nice...wordplay...hit good....


Vinci................
1st bar-decent opener....ok wordplay...overall a pretty good bar
2nd bar-2nd line was nice....hit hard...good bar
3rd bar-good closer....hit good.....



overall it was pretty hard to choose....but i picked marv because he did have a nice personal...whereas vinci had none.....i didnt like vincis structure either....overall i was just feeling marvs verse better.....i like his wordplay better than vincis also....i thought his punches hit a lil harder............return the favor with a vote in one of my battles marv......links in sig