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TeamOne 01-18-05 01:14 AM

yo can u return an honest vote to the link in the sig????? thanx

SUPERVILLAIN 01-20-05 11:02 AM

This was feedback posted for ~Babylon~
 
^^^UPPIN" FOR THESE YOUNG WARLORDS!!!^^^

checkin' the polls...........get him babz.


...the super...

fluidmoon 01-20-05 10:21 PM

Voted For: Phantom

I enjoyed reading this battle..lol, some great lines in here...
phantom~strong opener, nice flow to this, liked the punch on his hometown, and your strongest ones were the kurt cobain lines, nice, and the last bar, again, good personals, lol @ the ending line,i like your style with the questions theme, creative too.this was a strong verse overall, good job.1
Babylon~lol, this was good too, i liked your last bar the best, this is hard to judge,but i think that phantom had stronger lines here, barely, but i just felt his more, and this battle was an enjoyable read...but good job as well, stay up.1

¤ÐÅž¤ 01-25-05 10:26 PM

Voted For: Phantom

If you thought phantom was a fag, you havent been lied to
Sad thing bout the battle, this dued knows more about me than I do
lol..ok, personal but no....6.5/10
He must have followed my career since it began on the net
Whats sadder, someone that lives online, or dick rides for respect
..?????5/10
his alias is groovy, socrates reached his peak, pretends to be new see
cuz hes mediocer to vets, but can be the big man around the newbies
lol....i dunno....5.5/10
and I knew see, hes jelly like, he shakes, and he's soft
boasts cuz he made tourney semi's , but why brag about shit u lost
nice,....lol.8/10
thinks he'll git famous off the net, so i'll give him some closure
He got raped in the semi finals, to git his ass some exsposer
lol..ok.not bad.........7/10

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Come on B, I mean, I know you're probably a nice guy at heart
But why is it that as soon as you came back C.S. fell apart?
ehh,ok 6/10
I'm fresh with my shit, so you should prolly shut up and hear me yo
Cuz although ya state is New...I heard all ya punches years ago
lol...okblah on 1st line but ...6.5/10
Ya chances are slim in the battle, I mean how long has it been?
I aint even talking bout regristrations when i say you May not win
very nice....8/10
So feel the punches with me, cuz nobody is gunna see you alive
You might have lyrical nirvana but Kurt Cobain committed suicide
ok.6.5
See catch my flow dunny, ya weak punches will never float
What kinda guy sets up a battle where HE barely has min. posts to vote?
lmAO....8/10

both had some nice lines tough battle to judge...personals were great..lol...
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babz...33/50.soc.35/50........

....Gone.... 02-01-05 10:59 PM

Voted For: Phantom

Phantom-Ok, personals was good dissing about him leaving the c.s crew. Punches was nice, very effective, but in my eyes i think you still need elevation. FLowed pretty nicly. Wordplay was good.




bab- you kept talking about him being on your dick, which aint throwing any punches at all. Flowed pretty nicly, but the punches was all that great, nor effective in my eyes. Personals was good about "being on my dick" and all but punches with it wasnt actually hitting.




Overall=Ok battle, Phantom had some ok punches still need elevation though, had some effect to it. Personals was nice, personals and punches together was good in your verse. Bab ok verse punches wasnt good, weak at most, kept talking about him "being on my dick" which aint throwing good punches. I vote phan, basically because his punches was effective, with personals. Although bab was doing the same (personals with punches) It came out weak in his verse.


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