Here we go again...come on, just vote! The favor will be returned, just drop your links!

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Upping once again, damnit, topicals get mad slept on these days!!!

Voted For: Drama Queen

My vote is going to drama queen, cause I was feeling her part the most. It's original and made me wanna read the whole part cause I already wondered, why she was talking bout, "Beg HER to acknowlegde and accept the helpless lil creature inside my body", I was surprising. While the part of 3rd-shift seemed to go about the fact that, he didn't want the baby, but his partner had to be the one who didn't want him, or do I get it all wrong?

This was feedback posted for Drama Queen
 

drama queen u need to learn how to call battles lol yeah thats my feedback.

Thanks for vote and wtf is that feedback all about? Lmao...

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Anyways...thanks for the votes and upping for some more!

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Uppity up...damnit people, just vote! Favor will be returned for sure!

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Voted For: 3rd-Shift

damn, this was nice, you had some lines that were iffy but mic (old name i think.lol) you had some lines that i reread cuz they were so nice,negative side for 1.get red of the slash///
its annoyin 2...ya closer was ok,...kinda brutal n honest n real..overall im going with you cuz i my opinion you stayed on topic more...7.8/10
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this was real close, props to both
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wow, nice job, you deffinately kno how to take a subject n be original with it,..i liked this, overall i think you could improve if you had better structure(shorten ya lines by 2 words or so)last half of ya drop was better...it picked up throughout like a topicals supposed to.....nice job.1!
.good approach to the topic...7.5/10
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pz...

good look....
now that was an honest vote
uppin u hoez

Thanks for fully explained vote ¤ÐÅž¤, appreciated by both of us...upping for some more...

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Voted For: Drama Queen

3rd Shift:

You had an alright verse dawg. I think you had to stay away from talkin bout being in jail and having no money tho. Went a little off topic in places, although it relates to the topic..it just didnt flow. I wasnt feeling the dashes at the end of your lines either, you need to lose those. Vocab was not bad. Some lines were way longer than some of the others but it flowed alright. Imagry was there. Good Job 74/100.

Drama Queen:

Damn girl, this was a tight drop. You had amazing imagry that made your overall verse seem almost like a true story (which in some ppl's lives im sure it is). Dividing your verse into 2 sections made your verse overall more effective. Pretty good vocab...very descriptive word choice. And that ending was just awsome. One thinig to remember for next time is to watch your line length...if you didnt have flow - those lines woulda lost my vote. Very good job, props. Overall 85/100

No hate 3rd Shift...I just felt Drama Queen came a bit harder than you today. Someones gotta win, and Im sure the votes will show that she did...better luck next time dawg. Payce.

Voted For: Drama Queen

ok thirdself lines were kinda streched here flow was off which doesnt make snese you should have that down pat being a producer and all anyways imagery was ok vocab couldve been better here also you aint really bring me into your story emotion lacked here as well as imagery too:(
drama queen damn your getting dope at topicals good vocab and flow lil streched cut your damn lines shorter imagery was dope it was as if i was there in your mind good shit it was like a movie and that wins topicals and got you this dope.

^Thanks for honest and fully explained votes, much appreciated!

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Voted For: Drama Queen

well first i think it was a bad topic for a guy to write about so i give props to third shift for trying but he could decline and asked for a better topic so no mercy.

D.Q.- i'm gonna break this judgement into two section like you did for your battle
1st: it was intense i was reading to see what happen next not just to vote. there was a good flow and ok style and great mults. but i don't get it were you saying you were a lesbian???(NICE) i like the way you end the first part. was thought it was going to be bad with the way you opened it but it got better.
2nd: i thought this one was more intense the the first one. still a good flow and even better multas. alot of question i had in the beginning were answered here(thats good)very creative closer, but i don't think he would be gay if he said that. idk if the whole story sounded so realist but it was a good story. i like the vocab used, but i got tripped up on theses lines "Steve holds me tight, whispering sweet words,telling me what really mattered
Heart bruised by her cold rejection but I don't need her false affection" (who is this her i thought you were talking about steve) overal very nice one of the best topicals i've seen. 8.75/10

3rd-in a way yours was really creative i think the lines were more creative then the idea. the flow was alittle rough but sylte was ok you had really hot multas too. i especially liked the opening and closing parts. however some times it seem like it was jumping arond alot and not really staying on topic. overal it was a good battle i give you a 6.5/10

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