Voted For: ~Babylon~

i voted for u jus cuz of urh vocab u used if u aint hav that u wouldnt hav got my vote

Voted For: ~Babylon~

Aii this Is How I Feel

Babylon
Did his/her best I Think This Person came With The most Emotion and it was like I was jus Sittin there watching this whole thing Happen LOL But N e ways You Stayed On Ya topic and you did it well and You did it flawless and thats why You Take This Battle

THE_GAME
you came very um .......short LOL its like you were tryin to push everythang Up in One line mayne a quick word of advice NEVER WRITE A TOPICAL THAT SHORT AGAIN !! lol its like ya cuttin yaself to limits Mayne Neva do That

Peace

Voted For: ~Babylon~

Hands down babylon gets this one. his emotion was good and he had better vocab some of ur stuff was overplayed but keep working on it dog. his structure was good he had some good lines and his multis and imagry was execellent. here is what got u this


Livin' life and learning lessons, despite life's agressions
fights with in, its mental supression, sentimental sessions
wita psychiatrist forcing out feelings, tormenting and revealing
scorching yet concealing, feeling con'd by how its appealing
now I'm dealing, with what i've got from a life not worth living
this knife n cursid sinning, cutting wrist, how worse is it gitting
soon its thoughts of thrills, drinking alchole and lots of pills

6.6/8

hit up on my links please peace