that was the greatest feed I've ever got ever ever ever

uppin this for my fuckin homie...

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this was deep mayne....you could tell this was some real ish........the emotion was crazy mayne..could real feel you on this one..the rhymin was nice..mutlis set it out perfectly..and the structure was awesome....the hook was nice too...

'wool coats to get warm,for the winter..although burn in the summer..
because you keep the coat on..to cover whats under..'

^^that line was hot...some real ish myne..ma favourite line..over all i actually liked reading this piece..u got a knack for this kind of writin..keep em comin mayne..wun

return the favour in my open mic pleases..pz

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fine don't crit my shit....don't give two fucks

spfffffffffffff

^)___________(^ jesus fuickin chirst

jesus fuckin christ
is this not getting feed cause its not a collab?FUCK

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picked out my favs:

New clothes purchased soley for a new pose..murders certainly..
escaping cases..I have no pateince for loopholes..

- no shit, nice open

then you gotta produce your spending as more then your buckets..
because its either you owing money..or you running with nothing..

- a bit jumbly, but good. i agree.

getting yelled at about grades..getting stabbed in my face..
I don't exaguarate..it just really aggetiates.....

- too typical to be right.
nice job.

i gotta nominate dis for tha hall of fame kid...mos def....i give it a 10/10...simply perfect...nothin but tha best from you...~1~

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