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JRoy 01-08-05 11:35 PM

Just gonna do it offa the top of my head...hope you like it

Mixed feelings towards a girl that I liked
Not sure if she liked me or if she was just messin
See she acted like she might one day
The next day she was all over some one else
So it makes me wonder why she wouldn't pick up the phone
But when we did talk we talked for hours on end
So I dont know if i should stick with it
Or give up and fall in love with an other broad
Not sure how she'd react if i gave her a hundred roses
If shes act happy look happy or be happy
But i know i like her a lot and will never give up
So I must go on like the Us Soldiers did in the wars
And not stop till i show her how i feel towards her
Maybe she'll change thoughts and feel me
I mean I look into her Eyes and think oh damn
There beautiful like the sun when it rises up in the morning
Seems like I feel like i love this girl
Or is it puppy love? full graw what could this be
I hope that she feels for me and gives a chance
That'd be exciting and i'd have some one 2 hold

Kawn Flixx 01-08-05 11:59 PM




damn thats hard how can I not rhyme?its impossible..

umm...


Life's like.heat seeking......hidden signals..Invisible missles
(sorry but it goes with it)
going both ways..Bi-routed..emotions hoping for another path
as veiwing only extended phone calls as the week ends weakining muscles
including the strongest..helpful would be to think of me
as I ponder you..being two faced..but both are very pretty
think before action..your confusing my mind..you'r a brain teaser
giving me gestures and looks..so you can't blame me I'm innocent
is so..you're my shepord and Im the scapegoat..
your playing tug a war pushin me back and away..
you can't give me directions to the desert..so I'm not sure
but I can guess..I can dream..you can play..with my mind
with mindgames..although I don't know if you know..but I'm sure
I want you by my side..like..is just a word hands are a feeling
hands are your future..your the lines on my palms truthfully
but a truthful guess I know I'm don't know..its half your fault
and half mine.. I have and half mind..one side says approach
but your maybe gonna laugh..or you maybe gonna smile
you're your own woman..but your leesh has a blurred owner
you often are caught using mascare but make up your mind



damn its so god damn hard not to rhyme s I used semi-all metas

pc

Kawn Flixx 01-09-05 12:04 AM

I hope he picks mine..cause I cry very easily :(

villagepimp 01-09-05 12:09 AM

That was bitchin' (bad-ass) Indeph... someday you'll be as good as me...

Wickedclown 01-09-05 12:09 AM

dabados.... why do u make threads like this and then no show 2 weeks in a row in poetry league?

TeamOne 01-09-05 12:10 AM

^^^^(to VP) agreed...... not gonna try anymore

Dabatos 01-09-05 12:32 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by WICKEDCLOWN
dabados.... why do u make threads like this and then no show 2 weeks in a row in poetry league?


WtF? NO-Show? lmao, i didn't no-show, I wrote my verse, but just didn't try? so wtf u talkin bout no show? ConfuseD?

Dabatos 01-09-05 12:34 AM

both poems we're good, just waiting till tomorrow

Kawn Flixx 01-09-05 12:34 AM

yo Doba you like or not? either way thanks for the practice

Wickedclown 01-09-05 12:37 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Dabatos
WtF? NO-Show? lmao, i didn't no-show, I wrote my verse, but just didn't try? so wtf u talkin bout no show? ConfuseD?



your dumb... u no showed against me... then u no showed against lady fiya... valor just kicked u outta the league... dumb ass

Dabatos 01-09-05 01:08 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by WICKEDCLOWN
your dumb... u no showed against me... then u no showed against lady fiya... valor just kicked u outta the league... dumb ass

wtf?? I was still in the league?? Oh shyt, i thought they already took me out wen i lost??

Optimus 01-09-05 01:26 PM

My life doesn't seem complete without you company.
Scent's of rose's billow off your body, and stress my mind.
Vision's of me and you, run back and forth through my head.
Because i feel something for you, i have never experienced before.
I look forward to the day, when i can wallow in your personality.
And become close to you, share our feeling's and share our passion.
To think rational, would just be grinding my mind all about your feature's.
Word's cannot express my emotion's toward you, i just need you to know.
That i'll forever respect you, whatever and wherever life takes you.
Be there as a friend to console and heal your pain, and frustration.
Or upon your decision to metamorph into someone more than a friend.
Every waking moment, your essence is imprinted on my thought's.
And every time i close my eye's you are all i see and all i want to see.
Ringing you on the weekend, but you never answer upon my attempt's
Yet, you converse with me for hour's, but i get shutdown like withered roses.
I dont know if youre posing,i just cant detain the feelings that need to surface.
Give me a reply, to put my hopes to rest, and let me live my life with you as a companion.
Push my boundary's to contain you in freedom, and treat you wisely.
So, before you pass judgement, i just want you to know my view's.
That every soul, me and you, should become close, and become Two
.

Optimus 01-09-05 01:34 PM

I hope you like it dabatos....

~Lady Fiya~ 01-09-05 03:48 PM

aight Dabatos i got a poem coming up........... so wait up, aight...........

~Lady Fiya~ 01-09-05 03:49 PM

nvm cuz i ain't writing no poem about liking no female... forget that, and to those who said poems rhyme, they actually don't more than half the time...


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