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Can we get some more votes

Voted For: Socrates


Socrates:

Son, what in the world makes you think you can abuse me?
You still got the username and glow colors that scream new b
^^ehh wack 3/10
Deserve respect...pfft...for you its not even close to hardly
You only here because everyone is leaving your crew on RB
^^decent personal 5/10
You aint even audio after like a year, still only doing text
So I aint talkin bout your name when I say your albums celes
^^dope name play and meta good punch 9/10
I'm keying this up in 7 minutes,with you,i need no effort at all
Cuz it's easy to split Cel.................with no mitosis involved
^^dope meta decent punch 7/10
Your'e a fuckin pathetic faggot, maybe just a loser at most
You dont pull crowds in......you just jerk them off for votes
^^lol just funny 6/10

overall : 30/50(60%)

I told him I needed cash, & he must be gay, see
Next thing I know this soft fuck got a job to pay me
^^kinda wack 4/10
But he just wants to be down, chill wit the gang
So ill frame him for murder just so he can finally hang
^^decent punch ok meta 6/10
Fuck u thinking, industries hard, u won’t make it
Cuz Rap is life.. no wonder Socrates is overrated
^^no 3/10
& when ya pops said he saw you smokin, im'a be true
That was just ANOTHER excuse to beat you
^^wtf is this lol 2/10
& this hated kids ugly as fuck, and I wont lie
Hes the ONLY cat to post his pic on HHS & get 0 replies
^^lmao dope personal good closer 9/10

overall : 24/50 (48%)

vote: socrates

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PLEASE return the favor on this battle with an honest vote or i will eat your unborn children

*sigh*

I thought my opener was nasty.. or atleast Rb did.. was enough to beat soc in 1-2

but meh.. good job soc :)

Voted For: Celestial

Celes:
1st bar is recycled for sure soo boo to that and the frame hang connection is gettin kinda old but it still looked nice here, flow was fucked in the 4th bar...LMAO @ the closer tho, good personal and comedic

SOC:
lol, like the opener cuz i be thinkin the same shit so much
2nd bar failed, if they were leaving cuz of him then ok, but this was wa miss...like the sell less nameplay, and lol @ the biology in ya verse, meh @ the nameplay...and NO!!!! @ your closer, shit was honestly garbage...rest of the verse was nice until then

Overall: basically..i liked more of soc's bars then celes's....funny, cuz i came in here expectin celes to win...good closer to celes tho, shit was nice

v/ socrates


P.S. hit up that link in my sig (4 bars each) i need someone with at least half a brain to drop a somewhat decent vote, shit isnt even a contest but hes gettin votes

LMAO...FUCK...um, someone get a mod to change that...i posted the vote in the wrong box...LMAO

Voted For: Celestial

I told him I needed cash, & he must be gay, see
Next thing I know this soft fuck got a job to pay me
decent opener, punch was aight here
But he just wants to be down, chill wit the gang
So ill frame him for murder just so he can finally hang
decent punch here, nuttin much
Fuck u thinking, industries hard, u won’t make it
Cuz Rap is life.. no wonder Socrates is overrated
good line here, punch delivered
& when ya pops said he saw you smokin, im'a be true
That was just ANOTHER excuse to beat you
decent punch
& this hated kids ugly as fuck, and I wont lie
Hes the ONLY cat to post his pic on HHS & get 0 replies
nice closer here, decent persona…punch landed

overall u had a nice drop, some of the punches were
aight but overall, nice persona’s, but overall decent drop
from you though.. .. ..


Son, what in the world makes you think you can abuse me?
You still got the username and glow colors that scream newb
no…punch was weak here, plus hardly rhymed here
Deserve respect...pfft...for you its not even close to hardly
You only here because everyone is leaving your crew on RB
decent punch, persona was aight…nuttin much here
You aint even audio after like a year, still only doing text
So I aint talkin bout your name when I say your albums celes
decent punch
I'm keying this up in 7 minutes,with you,i need no effort at all
Cuz it's easy to split Cel.................with no mitosis involved
decent punch here, hardly landed
Your'e a fuckin pathetic faggot, maybe just a loser at most
You dont pull crowds in......you just jerk them off for votes
good punch, prolly ur best here…

overall u had a decent drop, some of the punches were
aight too, persona’s were decent, vocab was okay, and the
structure was in place overall decent drop though.. .. ..

Cel's comming back!!
























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This was feedback posted for Celestial
 

dope battle....just checkin the polls...............

Voted For: Socrates

have to go with this boy right here he had better structure, flow was good hits where harder had better personels opener-closure was better. his lyrics was good his rhyming was ok he could do better I know it but he did ok to take this battle by storm. But here are the ones that I liked in this bat and his vocab was good also hit up on my links peace!



Son, what in the world makes you think you can abuse me?
You still got the username and glow colors that scream newb
Deserve respect...pfft...for you its not even close to hardly
You only here because everyone is leaving your crew on RB
You aint even audio after like a year, still only doing text
7.7/10


I told him I needed cash, & he must be gay, see
Next thing I know this soft fuck got a job to pay me
But he just wants to be down, chill wit the gang
So ill frame him for murder just so he can finally hang
Fuck u thinking, industries hard, u won’t make it
Cuz Rap is life.. no wonder Socrates is overrated
& when ya pops said he saw you smokin, im'a be true
5.1/10

have to go with this boy right here he had better structure

What the fuck? Rofl

better structure? Our stuctures were identical..

*dead*

close this and give him the win before i kill some one for being a complete idiot

LMFAOOOOOOO...dayum nigga. ..does that end your 80-0 winning streak?

shit..before they close it go return the vote on that link in my sig

Voted For: Socrates

Damn Well i cant Lie im atell yall rii off of bat Socrates took this one BEcuase Celstail Lacked punchez 4real But N e ways heres An explanation for the PPl

Celestial
You lacked the Basic Neccesities of a Battle verse mayne You def Lacked punche which hurt you the most its ok to do personals every here and then but You dont need to do them Alll The TIme But mayne like I said You couldve done betta NO HATE its jus that You didnt Really use n e Good punchez And Even You can look through ya verse and see that But n e way
Best Bar
Fuck u thinking, industries hard, u won’t make it
Cuz Rap is life.. no wonder Socrates is overrated

Aii
Socrates
Well You didnT really come your harderst but you came harder Umm Theres not much i can say to you except never underestimate your oppenents Mayne because if you do then theyll sneak an easy ass win ova on you So Neva do That Umm,...l...I gave you the win When I read that bar
which Is also your
Best bars
You aint even audio after like a year, still only doing text
So I aint talkin bout your name when I say your albums celes
I'm keying this up in 7 minutes,with you,i need no effort at all
Cuz it's easy to split Cel.................with no mitosis involved


Aii yall Thats Jus How i feel Plz RTF in the link In my Sig

Fuck no.. 3/4 of RV fails to understand what a good punch is

Voted For: Celestial

Socrates-Nice flow, Punches with personlas, was "eh" kinda didnt come hard, you had effectives, but not the way you usually do, you came a little basic and balanced with effective and not effective.Nice multies.


celes-Nice verse, punches were good. Flow was nice and readable. Personals was awsome. Wordplays was GOOD as fuck. Punches were very creative with soem dope personals.




overall=Close battle, but i think celes got it, he had some harder punches with soem good flow plus personals and wordplay. Soc, your punches was good, but not the way it usually hit hard, came a little basic. Nice multies. Personals was good, the punches is what is weak in your verse, punches was balanced. Celes however came harder with the punches, so my vote goe sto celes. Wun.