This was feedback posted for Kordozar
 

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Voted For: Kordozar

lol damm fam ya really killed dis kidd with da personals datz enuff rite there......

opener-kord..other dude ya 1st bar aint ryhme
structure-im
punchlines-kord
multis-nun
wordplay-nun
creativity-kord
personals-kord...datz where he took dis battle
finisher-kord...
enjoyed-kord....nuff said dude merked em with da personals

links r in da sig..return it ya'll

okay. i'm getting tired of this.. i'll break down his verse because none of you obviously know how to vote.


In A Battle Against This 1 Man Army...Kid Has No Fellow Soldiers...
He's 2 Soft, So I'll Dismantle His Neck 4rm His Shoulders..

First Line: Hmm, self glory..
Second Line: No punch.. violence threats are played.

Since He's A "Gangsta Walrus" I'll Make Sure I'll "Seal"His Defeat..
Wants Ta Be A Professional Rapper,But Got Fired Before His Producer Created A Beat..

First Line: Let's see.. "walrus" & "seal" wordplay, how's it comin' on the creativity judges? Judges-2
Second Line: There's a fake personal.. with no creativity..

..........Kids A Stalker Imed Me Harrasin Fa A Battle..
He Doesn't Want "Beef",Knows Tha Outcome Would Be Tha Death Of This Cattle...

First Line: Could have been decent but it had nothing to do with his punch.. so no.
Second Line: OMG..... "Beef" & "Cattle" wordplay?! LOL! there is NOTHING more PLAYED than THAT. Judges-0!!!!!!!

Locations Close Ta Tha "Frisco",So Alreadi He Knows Who Won't Get A Win..
He Stays In Tha "Bay Area"Wea Its Infested With Homosexual Men..

First Line: I'll take that as a 49er joke.. any sports teams jokes are played.. period
Second Line: A gay joke!!!!! Judges-0!!!!! PLAYED!

If Had A Sever Case Of Diahrea,He Wouldn't Have Hot Shit..
Not Straight Nor Gay But In Tha Middle Like Tha Religion Agnostic

First Line: Diarrhea = Hot Shit diss - NO!!!!!!
Second Line: And ANOTHER sexuality punch = PLAYED!!!


People, i'm sorry, but hop the fuck off and learn how to vote. His verse couldn't get any more played... seriously.

up.

hop off Kor's dick.

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Voted For: Kordozar

How do u go up to sum1 undefeat'd and spit a verse like that that was a peice of shit man u need to elavate big time nigga ur punches and personals were weak man structure normal but every thing else weak

kordozar came like usal and swept his oppent man u need to learn ok Structure ok, punches tight personals nice i think u deserve this vote

Voted For: Kordozar

i gotta go wit kordozar mayn, nigga came out wit da heat n his made more sense...i mean imagine had it goin til "Kor's a fat fuck who only types, but no one's seen
Sits roun' drinking yoo-hoo to be less of an Ovaltine
Dude's on the road to nowhere & he's riding shotgun
Did a search for your dopest verse, but you ain't got none!" i mean damn son kordozar rite u sittin der checkin his whole bio huh son?? but that ovaltine line was hot i must admitt...but still i think in overall dude had a betta verse