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~Da_Illest~ 01-24-05 10:03 AM

Voted For: Adrenaline

opena: adrenaline
structure: adrenaline
vocab: adren
multi: adren
punches: adren
overall: adren
closa: adren

oh yea hotstudalrt if u structure ur flows betta u would have gotten my vote
my vote goes 2 adrenaline

Adrenaline 01-24-05 11:11 AM

word upp!!!

keep votin!!..........

Adrenaline 01-26-05 02:45 PM

fucking uppin people...!!

Mortem 01-26-05 02:48 PM

This was feedback posted for Hotstudalrt
 
Fix your structure out, and actually rhyme...
But not about dungaree's.

Scareface 02-01-05 05:18 PM

Voted For: Adrenaline

Damn WTF

Aii Here Is What It Is

Adrenaline
Your Verse was Nice you Came wit Decnt Punchez That really connected To Make A Diffrence In Ya Style ........ Which I Really Like To see in a verse ......Far as Multis They Made me Laugh Not in a Bad way But In a good way like They really Trip Me out and Ya structure was WAY better Than Your oppenents....So Basically ill give ya a
8.5/10

Hotstudalrt
First Of all B4 I even Talk About what was In Ya verse Lets talk Bout What Ya Verse was .....Neva Eva In Yo Evalastin Life type a verse like a paragraph I felt Like I was In History Class Readin that Stuff ....But n e way ya verse was kinda weak Not To be mean or n e thing but im jus sayin the truth And to Let Ya know ya punchez didnt Really Connect And dats what Hurt You the most
So Ill Give ya 3/10

PLEASE RTF IN THE LINK IN MY SIG PLEASE I WOULD REALLY APPRECIATE

M-Eazy 02-04-05 12:54 PM

Voted For: Adrenaline

adrenaline took this one with better structure and harder punches. i think u came more prepared in this one, and u dropped harder wordplay, and i was feelin ur vocab and mettas in this one. u did kinda start off slow to me, so i think u should elevate in that. u need to come more consistent in ur verses, but no hate...good drop
Hotstudalrt -i wasnt really feelin ur verse. i thought a lotta lines were play'd and simple. i think u should elevate big time. ur structure was wayy off...and u didnt even break yo barz down, it was like reading a book. rappin aint u.,..no hate, im being real. i dont even think it wouldve sounded good if ur verse was audio...u need to elevate alot.
overall-this was wayy too simple doe adrenaline. u came wit it in this one, and it was one-sided for u...good drop

plz return tha favor on battle link in sig, aganist CJ. thats been up for too long, and it only takes a few minutes of ur time, cause i took my time out to vote on thsi. and plz make ur vote xplained...

good drop...and return that vote fam....~1~


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