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This was feedback posted for Killah.Bwoy
meh im not voting cuz you didnt try and got ripped :(
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Voted For: Killah.Bwoy
Aiight, Listen.. Fuck You, Dawg, Cummin At Me..Better Luck Bustin a Nut.. I Swear On My Life, I'll take Your ass Cheeks, and Glue Them Shut.. aww nasty N good.. That Eliminates my Job, Now I Don't Have to "Shit On You".. Crush Your House, What You Gon Tell The Judge, I cut Your trashbin in two? ha nice diss.. Face It Kid, Your Hands The Closest thing your gettin to pussy.. How Can Killah Fall off, When I Got mini Mouse tryna push-me.. nice ... Pop! Pop! Naww That Aint The Gun, Thats your Mom Thirsty Again.. Kid can't seem to miss the target, Shame, he alwayz aims for the rear end.. decent I Release Shaq Attacks, Fuck L.A, Like Your Team, You Fell Off.. And I Aint talkin bout church when I sound The Bells Off.. could of been a better ending but still decent.. tight verse hard punches good flow nicely done K.B..... Listen ya fake azz vet, i show no remorse at all See imma rob KB..............with NO toys involved decent but almost what fabolous said.... You been here forever and still no respect? shit Say you the "underdog"....but thats just a bitch no hit... Look son, all of your punches are at such a void I'd think a fag like you could at least spell "boy" not a good diss... but aight... You suck homeboy,what else you need to learn? Whatchu gunna do Wendy's voters see you served? nah... It's over, and it's done, what else do I gotta say? You're just a nerd who averages 55 posts a day! ok ending, no hard hits, flow aight, creativeness weak better luck next time... |
mayne yall niggas got some bullshit votes, if you think i won just vote cuz this nighga is cheating or soemthing, i obviously merked him
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dont whine, bout it...to much newbs do that these days
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Voted For: Killah.Bwoy
aight pleim first two bars were his only nice punches.......kon. was more consistant, and that min mouse line killed it.........so i vote kon for better punches and overrall verse v/kon |
Voted For: Killah.Bwoy
Pleim: uh your verse wasnt that great there might have been good stucture but you made it that way by using.................thats dumb dont do that the vocabulary was weak and you didnt have a very good punch and twist to yoru verse to actually diss Konflicks try using metaphores and punches to diss him to win...no hate Konflicks: not the best from you cuz the stucture was weak but your punches were creative and you used metaphores to express them...the vocab wasnt there but you had a better twist to using something close....the emotion off the punch was good i jsut felt you got this...pz Opener: K closer: K vocab: K metas: K punches: K stucture: P flow: P win/ Konflicks |
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