50Hater_Killer stop freeposting

sorry to bring up shit close to heart man, got given a topic so i drop it

word i'll post my verse in a minute.. it's only 11...... :)

stayin up late for this shit, 5:30 here

ok flow i cant see k no edit button so i gotta double post my votes,

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1904053

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=172102

We’re alone inside an old shed, outside theres more bloodshed
From the raids of war, back and forth, shouts near my bunk bed
Half the neighbors have fled.. Unfamiliar soldiers and gun shells
So empty, but plenty delivered in bodies, faces missin sum detail
The water I brought to my face to clear my thoughts a tragedy daily
Lately, the earliest shadow of sunset shows my faith as it’s fading
The one I ask for help, does not answer, we answer our own prayers
I’m lookin for the reasonable explanations, but even those aren’t there
-Lookin amongst the ground, the nearest sound, I stepped on used flare-
My heart jumped probably higher than young children testin mines
Told they would be fine, Rebels dress them up in heavy material blind
The little souls used for someone’s escape route, there’s no comfort
The men are aggressive, a lesson is women are forced to be mothers
Liberty is unlawful, quite awful how our world is collided into fueds
Of other kinds.. The Nike, Reebok, Filas.. Shoes we’d never used
Our rare supply for food.. What countries consider as extreme fasting
Is an average meal, for the elders, the wells without water it’s drastic
We pass these things because I’m used to the shortage, it’s normal
And natural for our surroundings to look horrible, admit our troubles
But continue to struggle for dreams of bigger nations is not our quest
We have yet to establish a future, that may be criticized nonetheless
And we want no harm amongst those who died trying to protect cultures
Once grown and practiced for a long time now.. Our religion is open
And the doors have never been closed to those who plead to return
try to understand our difference, comparing 2 worlds.. bout time u learn

lady won this due to her verse not being a battle verse, also because she had a way better story line and more imagery..

vote: lady

sorry for free posting ;) but I felt lady on this one homes no affense it was just as if I was living it as I am now and had me thinkin more and more of my pops. But her strucutre was good she had better rhyming and her vocab and multis where good but no hate on u just keep elevating on that iight.

vt lady

and please check out my topical I had a no show.

i read disordas 2nd verse
not much to vote on, landslide victory in my opinion lol

emotion-lady fiya, disorda had emotion in her verse too but it just wasnt as much as lady fiya in anyway...fiya brought a lot more with her lines and descriptions...

imagery-lady fiya, wasnt feelin any in disordas verse lady brought a great amount of vocabulary and it helped describe what was happening tremendously...a lot of props here on the vocab too...

the rest was basically fiya, i actually thought disorda had a better flow since her lines were shorter for a better syllable count but lady got the other aspects...

good luck to both
peace

dude im a dude, nice going fiya
:)

i coulda sworn u said u were hopin u were the first white chick on here in ya welcome thread.. but anywayz good luck, Disorda :thumbup:..

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=172106

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=172102

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=172110

^if i need more Flow, just lemme know.. i believe 3 was enough..

voting
 

gonna give this one to lady fiya being a vet to this i think she easily took it to the kid in all categories flow, imagry, etc...The verse was a good all around drop. Disorda did a alright job for first time doing this but could tell he didnt know what was going on when he dropped a battle verse...its all good if ya need any more feedback pm the kid. :spit: :spit:

Vote Lady


Why? Imaginary And Flow Was Decent Plus Emotion


Disorda- I Didnt Felt Emotion Was Put On Your Verse Nor Imaginary Either


V. Lady, Wun

nice going lady, loved the verse. think me shud stick to cuss battles, dus rv have any or am i just blind?

vote/ Lady

Pretty simple vote, Lady had Disorda beat on everything - Flow, Emotion, Imagery
The piece was tight Lady, so much emotion and beautiful imagery, it was a pleasure to read.