Voted For: .MictoriouS.

its mier, and i dont wanna hurt the broke queer
but the last time you gotta check was right here
nope........
you banned d/r cuz nobody likes you at all? well
that wont be a problem for you, cuz your ugly as hell
i cant even think of a word to describe that
you wanna be good, but your wack as shit
who can succeed ''with l punches l like l this l''
i sure as hell can succeed
we talk about the best, but your wack is what be tell em
he puts a 'l' after every punch, cuz thats what he's gettin
wow...that made sense..still sucked...culdve been written better...
so in conclusion ur gay, and showed me what wack is like
so it wont be retirin, when i put down this mic
hah.................no

1/10

mictorious

IP:


..Man your style is just a question of writing u'll get disrespected- for-rhyming...
Cuz u and 'illness' don't go together like dyslexics- and-writing !!
blah...that was decent
See...My Spits 'Rock', So Don't Be surprised if ya get Hit witta Boulder...
Game Over, Cuz Like R-Kelly n' Hova, I'll leave a Big Chip on ya Shoulder..
nah...that was played
Mic’s words get |under ya skin, inta ya veins| n Go [Straight-to-his-Heart],
Its like| Im owning bars in prison yards| the way this Pussy’s [raped-in-my-bars],
repitition aint good...dunt use the same word in the same line..structure aint good
He cant wait to be ripped whne he’s [missin-his-patience]
As Im spittin bars that |Diss-Orient| like Im [rippin-an-Asian],
couldve been written better
This bitch got straight fooled like this Bitch is a villain//
Cut accross your body to leave you more scarred than a ritual killing//
aint feelin it

5/10

mictorious gets this fo betta punches

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Voted For: .MictoriouS.

Mictorious-Nice decent punches, with some ill wordplays. Flow was kinda chopped up. Stop with the, {} and shit, messing up the flow.Either way, nice decent punches with some good wordplays, fam.



Mier- Ok, much needed in elevation of punches, you've came out played and basic. Punches wasn't really "effective" enough to give you a win. Flow was "ok". Punches is what you lack in, elevate fam.




overall=Ok, battle is one-sided. Mictrious had some "effective" punches with flow and ill wordplays.On the otherhand mier punches was played and basic, much needed elevation in punches, mier. I give this to mictorious, cause he came harder with punches and wordplay. Mier came basic and played out.

wun

Voted For: .MictoriouS.

Aii do I really Got To explain My self ....damn I Hate doin this
Mier
you Came Sort of weak Mayne ya structure was Off A Lil and Your punchez didnt connect and i seen no personals multi's or metas

Mictorious
took this one by a long run Came wit some nice personals and punchez but multi's were absent but no biggy vocab was str8 um Basically you did betta than your oppenent and you get my vote

RTF ill have my Battle up in a Few min

Lol .. For got about this battle LOL ..
Well I'm Uppin .. This

Voted For: .MictoriouS.

.Mictorious.
your punches were aight here, some of them landed
your structure needs improving too, so work on that
your flow was good, and the vocab was decent overall
you had an okay drop, nuttin much here though

Mier
your flow was good, vocab was aight in this one
the structure was pretty decent, and not like Mic's
but overall your punches could've been harder though
and you would've tookin this battle here