RapVerse.com Community - The Black Plague vs MaRVJay1009

Voted For: The Black Plague

Breakdown for marv:

dont waste ya time makin new songs,u been waitin 2 long!..
talk shit i bet ya block sound like "2 days be4 you was born"*

Your setup contains a fake personal..ne never dropped a audio before, an I get da punch but its plain wack...u gonna be blasting him?....gat lines in a text battle is played, unoriginal, & jus plain wack

u wanna c me traped in shackles,cuzz i know y fags attack u..
rv dis fukin "FRUiT" done had alot of dicks in his "adams-APPLE"

Setup is blah, the punch was worded horribly & its incredibly played

so chill hoe...u dont have a ill flow..ur "fake" but "Real" slow...
yeah u can buy a "plastic-dick" but u'll neva get a "deal-tho"..

Setup was blah, so was the punch

dis bitch a neva be betta tha me F how sick dis BROaD pen is.
10 wins still dis dirty "bumm sleepin on me" like "park benches"

Setup was blah again, completely pointless, punch was worded horrible an ended with a seriously played simile

ya not on my level stupid dis dude jay is just servin you....
use ya writtens i'll "cum off da top" like "tupa's in convertibles"

Setup was once again BLAH, punch was weak...dat wasn't really wordplay u parenthesized but nice try..still a very weak line

i'll murda you so why you goin at dis kidd i do hurt dreams....
u winnin? umm no only time u'll "OWN-MJ" its dem "NEW 13'S"

Setup was decent for a change, but da punch was weak as hell.....another MJ line...more played shit..damn marv

it aint a thing homes!..back up from da KiNGS THRONE!....
cuzz black u couldn't "CELL"*sell* spittin off a "RiNGTONE"..

Setup was complete blah again, punch was wack...u tried for wordplay again an jus came off wack

my raps just torchin him punches dont land cuzz dis fags is forcin em
only time u'll "DROP a single" is in "chruch" when they "pass da offerin"

Setup was blah once again, I'll give u a lil credit for da punch tho..it wa ssomewhat creative..but still nothing special but for a closer its subpar

Breakdown for Black:

All these wins you got like shootin heroin up in ya jugular..it gets to ya head quick
But ya errogance is ignorant, shows you just “hard headed” like a lead-dick

Setup had a fair similie, punch was decent nothing great..an its weakened even more cuz u chose it as a opener

Yea ya perfect record nice, but all ya wins came against wack lames like you
Its unfair, like puttin mini-me and simon birch vs. MJ and shaq in games of 2 on 2

Setup alarmed me to what was to come next...ya setup was played..the old "u ain't battled nobody concept"...an ya punch was seriously played..everyone has done the unthinkable sports matchups theme..very played line

Just look at cats you battle... proud cuz you gonna beat "the wackest MC"?
We "established" you havn't got balls to beat peeps ya own caliber, cuz you losin to me*

Setup was almost a good one but u worded it poorly....punch was weak..its almost a knock on yourself

My punches hit like tsunamis…. Ya face was a beach I’l throw 1 to the shore
Since ya moms only had ya wack ass to give me a win, I guess I owe 1 to the whore

Setup was wack..everyone's on a tsunami kick since the recent events an u worded it poorly as well, the punch was played an wack as hell...a momma concept?..come on man

Ya pathetic personals are pitiful, bringin em is pointless, like piss hole contraceptives
You tom cruise and this your “mission impossible”… cuz winnin is ya objective

I like the alliteration in ya setup..good shit, the meta wasn't bad neither...the punch was kinda corny & somewhat played but it was decent...nothing great but noticeable

Dropped my verse now you foldin under the pressure, like a bad poker hand
Chewed u up and spit you out…this battles like Lil Fips rap game..its over man

Setup was based on a overly used, overly played concept an it was wack to boot...da punch was jus plain ass

You wack, lackin skills, talent is absent..you more herbish than snoops pocket
Didn’t come hard enuff got dropped like the franchise from the Houston Rockets

Setup was decent...the punch couldn't be more played than it was...a franchise houston rocket line....u can't be serious?

Ya fear growin like rogaine, face burnin like propaine.. But you earned it yaself
Dumb idea to hit accept.. Call you kurt cobaine cuz you murdered yaself

Setup opening meta "rogaine one" makes no sense & the rest of it was jus wack....the punch was decent but very basic & a bad choice of closer but a decent line

Overall: Both dropped shitty verses...neither really had much of nothing...voting for the winner in this on was tough cuz there really wasn't much to go on.

Flow: Marv
Structure: Marv
Punches: Black
Personals: Tie
Metas: Black
Vocab: Black
Creativity: Black
Vote: Black