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Voted For: Spektikul

Voted: Spektiful
the opening from death was gangsta in a way everyone who has nothing to talk about. Death almost didn't have wordplay
or punchlines, just some allround shit you can use on anyone. Spektiful did hsve punchlines, and wordplay. However Death had multies, Spektiful didn't (well, listed and twisted maybe) But with multies you don't win a batle

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Voted For: Spektikul

Spektikul
Could hardly read your drop, from the way you put it in gray and shit, but anyway. Nice drop though, punches were on point, some of them were kinda blah though, but out of the whole drop they landed. Vocab was nice, structure was good too, even though you centered it up, it was still good, and the flow was aight too, but overall you had a nice drop man, decent wp's in there also...

Death
Your drop wasn't really the thing I was alooking for into this battle. Your structure needs improving though, because, shit, dont add the //'s and don't space out your lines too, just makes it look gay. But overall your punches were decent, not really hardhitting though, but decent. Overall just elevate more on your punches and add a little persona's in there too

No hate to Both...

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Voted For: Spektikul

Opener - Spektikul.......personal....harder.
Closer - eh..neither...both..weak.
Punches - Spektikul.....easily.
Personals - Spektikul..
Metas - Spektikul.
Multies - eh...not...much.
Structure - Spektikul....consistent.
Vocab - Spektikul..easily.
Creativity - Spektikul...slightly.


Death=played....that...AIDS..line...blah.

one-sided.


v/Spektikul

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Voted For: Spektikul

v/ Spek

at ease, i voted spek for obvious reasons. death was none of the above: dope, ill, decent, comprehendable, mediocre, original, expressive, above average, or defying. but thats what this site is for, to elevate, and your off to a good start. not trying to hate, just consider this positive critism.

spek: didnt have to come as hard as you did. but ya didnt wanna fall short, so nice drop, nice personals, nice multis, nothing negative to say about this besides " challenge someone thats a bit closer to your rank. equality is good, plus those kinda battles earn you respect. not to mention mad d/r.

anyways. congrats, you got my vote.


peace, dont return the favor...thats not why i vote.

Voted For: Spektikul

Spek Took Thiss Otha Kid Had Stretched Bars And His Lines Wass 2 Simple...

Openor=Spek,Good Punch Vokab And Personal
Strukture=Spek,Otha Kids Verse Wass Stretched
Vokab=Spel,Had Decent Vokab
Punches=Spek,Hard Hittin Punches
Personals=Tie Both Had Personals
Wordplay=Umm None Really
Closer=Spek,Damn Tha Death Ya Shit Wass Wack..

Spek Came Harder With Tha Punches Vokab And Personals,
Death Fix Ya Strukture Have Some Harder Punches

/V Spektikul.................

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