This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
 

checkin polls for my homie..hes in my crew.........uppin it too

This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
 

checkin the muthafucking polls............................................. ..

uppin 4 some more votes ppl

uppin 4 more votes

This was feedback posted for Assas-Sin
 

checking polls and upin your guys shit.............................................. ...................

uppin 4 more votes

uppin stop sleepin ppl and yo 3 votes is a tko fukk dat

Voted For: Assas-Sin

checkin dem pollz..................................

dang i didnt mean to vote i meant to leave feedback so pm strobe w/e u do

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

WHOA WHOA WHOA marv got this hands down

assassin ur shyt was pretty dope. but the first line. was mad played. MJ and mic lines are gettin played. the rest was decent. your best line was

Come on you from da Queens?Well i see why cuz ya surely aint a King
I just saw ya "Ass" walking out of a gayclub.Maybe youre a Drag Queen?


Your structure and flow really killed the verse though
7.3/10

Marv

Dope structure and flow. this shit was fire dawg. you're doin the damn thang now. your punches hit em hard. haha at the closer FIRE and good multi's

best line:
so get off my dick fagget i got DiFFERENT TEXT Da ORDER...
while im in a benz you'll be in a "iNTERNET-EXPLORER".....lol

no errors in this wun. a few filler lines but rest was fire

8/10

vote: marv

return da fav ya'll
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=173032

wow yo why did u check da polls in every wun of my battles...damm fukkin vote u not in my crew we not friends so u dont need da be checkin my shit

uppin 4 more fukkin votes stop sleepin niggaz

uppin 4 more fukkin votes ppl...yo ass y u not uppin dis shit fam

uppin 4 more vote yo ass u a real bitch fam

This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
 

*definition:
humdrum=something that makes no sense. (look it up)
[ill let you know if i see any other words your too dumb to know the meanings of]