thanks alot uppin........................................

This was feedback posted for •Para¶el•
 

Uppin...and checkin the polls on ma boy...

ight upppin.....yea i got this fo sho....yo Damian wanna just close this and give me the win?...i got you man you know it to right?...whats the point in waiting for 3 more votes it will take for ever...so we could jsut close it and its over..

This was feedback posted for Damian
 

wack drop parralell.........................................

parrallell you owned me aiight no doubt......dawgu need 2 increase ur fukin vocab,,,,,,,,,, rest my case......dnt start up a fukin beef again

why are you judging me your not suspsto use good vocab everywhere in your verse it throws the stucure and flow off then you dont even understand what a punch or metaphores are so dont say shit to me about wack drop and spell my name right if your gonna spell it...i would fuck you around Ceed..

Voted For: •Para¶el•

aiight this is alot easier to vote on

Parrallel you had much better imaginary... this shit was aiight i could feel it. ur vocab was better then ur recent topicals. im feelin this shyt. nyce. ur structure was Dope and so was ur flow. the structure kept me interested. i give this about a 7.3/10

Damian: nope topical aint ur thing. this was wackness. ur structure was mad ugly;. ur flow was off. i couldnt even see wat u were trying to say. this was horrible. dont need to explain it. 4/10

vote: parallel

Voted For: •Para¶el•

decent topical battle here...

Parallel:
your vocab was good here, pretty much good story on this piece...flow was good, structure wasn't stretched overall nice story though, had a good topic

Damian:
your story was aight too, nuttin much on this one though, you had a good vocab, and the structure wasn't all stretched all over the place, and the flow was good too, but i felt that ur story on the topic wasn't as good as Parallel's though..

NO HATE TO BOTH....JUST MY OPINION

Voted For: •Para¶el•

parellel has the emotion, vocab and all round better drop.
his rhymes are more scriptive. His imagery isactually visible.

damain-your drop is ok, but your lck substance. your rhyme need to be picked up alot. and you need to use better emotion's
vote-parellel