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50hater_killer 01-21-05 04:13 PM

iight where still upppin fur some votes up in her peace! ^^^^^^^

50hater_killer 01-21-05 08:15 PM

upppppin dis shit lets get some hoest votes up in her^^^^^^

phive 01-21-05 10:29 PM

Voted For: c.ghost

good job for a newb man anyone can beat this fool though anyway you won because you had better punches and better flow your structure could change a little bit check mine its tight anyway dawg gimme a holla well start a crew or something i like ya style

E.C 01-22-05 07:44 AM

Voted For: c.ghost

ryt this was a weak battle both of ya'll need to elevate alot 50... half of your rhymes didnt rhyme and some of your punches didnt hit... your was was aight but then ahain it was choopy in places becuz your lines didnt rhyme on some of them,

c.ghost you had alright flow and some alright punches at least your lines rhymed so thats why im giving this to you.... overall i think 50 got 5/10 becuz of his rhymes flow and that his punches didnt hit the right spot. i thing c.ghost got 6/10 becuz you had harder punches and your flow was better...

return the favour link in the sig.... no hate and stay up pz.

K.ontroverz.Y 01-22-05 10:02 AM

Voted For: 50hater_killer

alright 50hater got this. both didnt come good but 50 just had better punches and structure.

Ghost your shit was wack and boring to read. elevae

Dex 01-22-05 10:03 AM

Voted For: 50hater_killer

50 hater: Cool verse bro. Opener was good but it should rhyme really, lessened the quality of it a bit but it was still a good punch. Closer was good. I liked that. Better than his aswel. A good solid punch that hit. Some real good punches in ya verse there. Was some lines i thought were real good:

"c.gosht this aint no child movie casper was retired back in 99.
Ur rhymes are slow and my rhymes will merk u until u go senile" -This was cool. Your best line i think.

some good metaphors but i didnt see any personals or wordplay there really. You can still elevate yet but good none-the-less.


C.Ghost: I dont want this to come off too harsh but i really wasnt feeling ya verse much at all. You said murk far too many times, i think it was only bout three or so but it was noticeable. To be honest with the opener you used:

"Ima murk u cuz ill put 50 in u, and kill this hater
C.ghost, u cant c me but ill c u later"

You desered to lose this. Your punches were not only weak they were primitive. You have got a lot to learn bro but you can only get better.

50hater_killer 01-22-05 01:26 PM

uppppppppppppppin dis battle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

50hater_killer 01-22-05 07:20 PM

uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin!!!!!!! !!!!!!!

Sik Wit It 01-22-05 07:24 PM

This was feedback posted for c.ghost
 
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50hater_killer 01-22-05 10:47 PM

upppppppppppppppppppppin.......................... ...

Pop Lotty 01-23-05 01:34 AM

This was feedback posted for c.ghost
 
Uppin for chris cuz he is a faggot ass batch.........

50hater_killer 01-23-05 08:36 AM

.............................................uppin .....

Empire 01-23-05 08:41 AM

Voted For: 50hater_killer

vote 4 50hater_killer coz u came less wack sum of ur shit didnt rhyme so u cant expect me 2 pull out all da voting stops coz frankly dis battle wasnt worth it, but imma b kind:).
50 u had mediocre punches tht were harder than c.ghosts who didnt even attempt and ur structure beat his..

cghost u jus came wack, no metas no punches, no creativity...ELEVATE NO HATE
50 PLZ RTF IN MY SIG.

50hater_killer 01-23-05 12:00 PM

upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin...............dis shit!

DeE Block 01-23-05 01:32 PM

Voted For: 50hater_killer

c.gosht this aint no child movie casper was retired back in 99.
Ur rhymes are slow and my rhymes will merk u until u go senile
you're nothin bu a newbie to me so I will take it easy,
for this is like a commercal and u tell ur self easy pleasy cover gurl,
So before I get done with this mic,
I want everyone to know that ur gurl told me that u suck da dick,
8/10

dats why he wun he had betta flow,punches, and multis yo return me da favor no hate


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