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Voted For: Element

First, id like to disperse my worst verse, an leave this faggot rattled
How do you consider yourself a Werdsmith...if you've never even battled
decent opener…punch landed
Too rush to the top - the mush gotta stop,or you'll neva will win nadda
My superior linguistics throw punches, that make you look like a piñata
decent persona…punch was aight…
Six lines aint enough time, to rhyme and try to make you feel neglected
With half my skill I still ripped you....just wrong battle you accepted
decent closer…punch was kinda weak but was aight

overall u had a decent drop..punches all the way
decent drop from you though


I'd swing punch's at ya verse, but i'd be jabbing at thin air.
I'm just takin' ya for a ride...But everyone'd agree it ain't 'fair'.
…weak opener…punch didn’t really connect
On the building block's of life?..you still on the fuckin' mechanno.
Yeah i think ya \phat/ but just cuz ya keep it \rollin/ like tht nigga John Doe.
decent punch, kinda played here…
Abuse my verse? Ya like claudia schiffer and napolean dynamite, ya \no match/.
But Element's punch's are played, that's why i saw the \string's attached/.
decent closer

overall u had a decent drop, punches were aight
flow was choppy…decent drop from you though

Voted For: Element

element........
First, id like to disperse my worst verse, an leave this faggot rattled
How do you consider yourself a Werdsmith...if you've never even battled
nice opener...good personal....hit hard...8/10

Too rush to the top - the mush gotta stop,or you'll neva will win nadda
My superior linguistics throw punches, that make you look like a piñata
lol...nice....set up line nice...good punch...7/10

Six lines aint enough time, to rhyme and try to make you feel neglected
With half my skill I still ripped you....just wrong battle you accepted
ehh decent...coulda came harder with a better closer....5/10


20/30..........


werdsmith......
I'd swing punch's at ya verse, but i'd be jabbing at thin air.
I'm just takin' ya for a ride...But everyone'd agree it ain't 'fair'.
pretty good opener here....hit ok...6/10

On the building block's of life?..you still on the fuckin' mechanno.
Yeah i think ya \phat/ but just cuz ya keep it \rollin/ like tht nigga John Doe.
ehh didnt like it....decent punch though....5/10

Abuse my verse? Ya like claudia schiffer and napolean dynamite, ya \no match/.
But Element's punch's are played, that's why i saw the \string's attached/.
nice.....hit good....good concept.....8/10


19/20.................


the fact that element came with personal prolly made the difference in the battle.....i just felt that elements punches were better....

oh yea element........return the favor PLEASE.......link in sig

Uppin..................

Voted For: Element

..u win dis easy fam

opener-ele good personal...werd decent opener but didn't hit hard

structure-ele shit was real...werd ya lines stretched 2 much

punchlines-i'd have da say ele

personals-ele.....werd didn't have nun

finisher-ele.....werd ya shit was weak fam

overall-ele takes dis cuzz he was more consistant and had a personal...

return da favor link in da sig

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Voted For: Element

I'd swing punch's at ya verse, but i'd be jabbing at thin air.
I'm just takin' ya for a ride...But everyone'd agree it ain't 'fair'.
^^^^what????every agree it ain't fair what?
On the building block's of life?..you still on the fuckin' mechanno.
Yeah i think ya \phat/ but just cuz ya keep it \rollin/ like tht nigga John Doe.
^^^^this \ / is not needed and what dude john doe?
Abuse my verse? Ya like claudia schiffer and napolean dynamite, ya \no match/.
But Element's punch's are played, that's why i saw the \string's attached/.
^^^^one decent line

First, id like to disperse my worst verse, an leave this faggot rattled
How do you consider yourself a Werdsmith...if you've never even battled
^^^^ok if it's leading into something
Too rush to the top - the mush gotta stop,or you'll neva will win nadda
My superior linguistics throw punches, that make you look like a piñata
^^^^lol nice i liked this lolol
Six lines aint enough time, to rhyme and try to make you feel neglected
With half my skill I still ripped you....just wrong battle you accepted
^^^^nice closer and good mults
vote element