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Kyleon 01-19-05 07:17 PM

Voted For: C.A.L.I

vote goes to cali simply because he had more personlas and better punches that hit...Structure was better than marvolous1009...Vocab was a tie in my opponion and flow was good both sides but wordplay i think cali got it....so my vote goes to CALI

Personals-Cali
Punches-Cali
Vocab-Both
Structure-Cali
Flow-Both
Wordplay-Cali

v/cali..simply because he was overall better...no hate just stating my vote..~1~

....Gone.... 01-19-05 11:14 PM

Voted For: C.A.L.I

Marv- Great punches, decent personals. Flow was good. Wordplay was decent as always. Punches and decent wordplays with some personals was the only thing that stood out of your verse. Although the flow was a lil chopped up, dont stretch your lines that much.



Cali- Nice punches. Decent personals. Flow was flowable. Punches was great and decent very much effective, i did seeked an wordplay in your verse, it was decent.




overall=Close battle, marv threw some hard punches with some very good wordplays. Personals too. Cali the same. This battle is close, but i gots to give my vote to "CALI". Marv although you did had some good punches with soem decent personals, with wordplays. Cali punches came a little harder, very much effective. I aint hating on you marv. Cali just got this by an Land slide. Great punches from "marv", but i felt cali punches just came a little harder,wun.

SUPERVILLAIN 01-20-05 10:39 AM

This was feedback posted for C.A.L.I
 
...checkin' the polls...

cal, im not sure if your with us yet......so i cant vote.....lol. some nice verses came from both of you....but honestly i think cali takes this one.

good job fellas. one.

s.v.......c.s.

Black Queen 01-20-05 10:50 AM

This was feedback posted for C.A.L.I
 
checkin dem polls hope u rope his ass cause he a bitch

50Cal. 01-20-05 11:07 PM

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eph 01-21-05 01:04 AM

Voted For: C.A.L.I

v/ CALI

i dont even like you. this is cause id hate to see someone as wack as marv win this battle. i still have wit, even though i have no respect for you. your verse was good. best lines:

'lines so stretched....skins to view um!"

you came hard with every lines, some heavier than others, but collectively smashing. a bit hyphy, but you cleared it all up with every ending, nice closure, next time dont tell a story before you spit, no need to jusify your punches, just let em hit...and let people vote on the visual facts alone. nice drop.


marv: woot. im not saying it was horrible, im just saying it wasnt good enough here, you need to battle lower ranks a bit more, before you step to the few that claim to own the site. damn emp. but you came decent, nice punches, but they didnt clarify your personals, i didnt see much person faultiness flowing in your piece, but you still came with something, put up a very possible fight to win, but didnt cut it. next time my bets on you.

vote: C.A.L.I.

peace, DO NOT return the favor, thats not why i vote.

50Cal. 01-21-05 02:08 AM

up for 5 so i can finish this queer............................................. ........

Spektikul 01-21-05 02:29 AM

Is this a pink slip battle???

K.ontroverz.Y 01-21-05 06:54 AM

This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
 
haha im jus checkin the polls. a.....................

50Cal. 01-21-05 07:56 AM

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50Cal. 01-21-05 05:37 PM

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50Cal. 01-22-05 10:14 PM

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50Cal. 01-23-05 12:38 PM

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M-Eazy 01-23-05 07:50 PM

This was feedback posted for C.A.L.I
 
cali took this...marv's lines were too stretched, which fucked up his structure...and plus i wasnt feeling it, but whatever...yall both weak...

50Cal. 01-24-05 01:56 AM

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