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Parallel 01-24-05 08:29 AM

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Originally Posted by TecKnic
it was eehhh......the drop to me didn't really make sense......at all...no offense....but elavate some more..and work on ya story telling...overall boutta 6.7/10


thats becuz i use metaphores to be creative...but thanks to cbo..ight uppin

Parallel 01-25-05 11:24 PM

ight...............uppin

Parallel 01-26-05 06:25 PM

fuckin goofs leave some feed...uppin

....Gone.... 01-26-05 07:30 PM

just looking..........................and reading..........yep.........

Parallel 01-26-05 10:20 PM

leave me alone you herb...uppin

poetry2abeat 01-27-05 01:16 AM

didnt feel it all like that, i only get into open mics that makes me feel like you didnt try and write it you just wrote it though, i think you tried to ard to do a stlye thats not yours, dont tell me you dont want critism cuz that is feedback man, plus this whole drop was hipocrytical coming from you

Parallel 01-27-05 03:26 PM

yea i dont really write like this...i usually write about something to do with my life or something an base it on somethign thats to do with something ive done or someone that i know...and give it my twist...but anyway uppin

Data 01-27-05 03:41 PM

Battle me topically Par.
You down?

Parallel 01-27-05 11:40 PM

nope im to busy got audios to work on....but dont think im wack cuz of this drop i can do 10x better then this...but uppin

Parallel 01-28-05 07:43 PM

uppin...............

intensify effect 01-29-05 08:20 AM

thanks for following the rules........
good drop as-well...

Parallel 01-30-05 12:26 AM

^now your trying to be my freind....wtf.

uppin

gotaasswhoopin4u 02-01-05 05:52 PM

shit sucks ass.

Parallel 02-01-05 06:10 PM

fuck off....stop posting in my OM's

Oscar Abel 02-02-05 01:51 PM

Please stop doing this. You ruin RV, and stop saying you can do better cuz you cant.
Battle me topically, poetically, or text. & I'd still merk you.


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